Your Sweet Time, by me

[schmevil]

Comments

[parsimonia]

I love it! It's very precise and deliberate, which works perfectly for Snape. Thank you! <3

I think my favourite bits are:

in the exercise of his least favorite muscle,

The whole second stanza of 2., and:

If he were the kind, if he had ever been,
things would have ended just the same.

Because it's true!

[schmevil]

\o/

So glad you liked it. :)

[outlawpoet]

yeah! always pleased to see great stuff in it's final form. This really changed a lot in gestation.

[schmevil]

Your comments helped a lot. You helped me figure out where I wanted to go with this, and what I needed to do to get there.