pokémon -- reverse english, daddy's girl
title: reverse english
wordcount: 1199
rating: PG
prompt: "Gold/Kris - making out. Exactly what the title says. Lip-biting, hair-pulling… All that good stuff."
notes: Written for the Pokanon kink meme. God, I am so embarrassed.
synopsis: Reverse English: the sidespin applied to a cue ball that favours the opposite direction of its natural path.
( “What? You didn’t like it? Come here, I’ll do it better this time, I swear!” )
wordcount: 1199
rating: PG
prompt: "Gold/Kris - making out. Exactly what the title says. Lip-biting, hair-pulling… All that good stuff."
notes: Written for the Pokanon kink meme. God, I am so embarrassed.
synopsis: Reverse English: the sidespin applied to a cue ball that favours the opposite direction of its natural path.
( “What? You didn’t like it? Come here, I’ll do it better this time, I swear!” )
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Anyway, the really amazing work is 'Daddy's Girl' which is holy crap so awesome in so many ways I don't know if I can list everything. The premise, Janine's thoughts and Koga's mannerisms, and him calling her lotus, and the first part where you flesh out her lifestyle and her training so perfectly, I loved it -- how did you come up with all that imagery? Its just amazing, milking for venom and slipping pellets in her mouth, urghh so awesome. The meditation on the head for so many hours was the only thing I found sortof farfetched, but otherwise the wording and imagery just blew me away ( ... )
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I'm scaring myself too-- actually, no not really orz. I AM NOT VERY HAPPY WITH THE GOLD/CRYSTAL ONE. Idk, but I can only get a good writing mojo if I write...well, like if I have something like Daddy's Girl ; u ; And yeah, the humour was pretty low-key because I honestly suck horribly at it.
...I-I'M GLAD YOU LIKE IT ; U ; It's probably my best Pokemon work ever because idk it's the only piece I am really really proud of ahahaha. It was a brilliant prompt and I'm glad somebody posted it, because it seems I can only write Pokemon if I have a prompt to work off of. Idk why.
Ahahah yes. I fixed that bit ; w ; Thanks for pointing it out to me!
EEE THANK YOU ❤❤❤ Means a lot to me (: I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was a pleasure to write this omg.
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and you wrote her perfectly
in other words, ilu <3
i honestly have nothing constructive to say. your writing is so so gorgeous & you develop the characters so beautifully and i just
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you've inspired me to go finish some fics, haha
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o//////o Amg thank you thank you thank you ❤❤ Been a looong time since I wrote anything non-crack for Pokemon I am actually happy with, so this is quite a relief to hear.
Aww, coolio! Go onnn and finish those fics! I'll be cheering for you :D
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I simply lovedlovedLOVED the way you filled out my prompt and just WRITING THIS COMMENT IS GETTING ME ALL FLAILY AND AAAAAAAH <33333333333
You perfectly captured their dynamic that is SO easy to fall in love with-- both of them are pretty cold and aloof, in comparison to other Pokemon characters, but deep down they care about each other so much, even if it's sort of hard for them to openly display it. AND JANINE IN PARTICULAR, poor girl tries so hard to be what her father wants and augh how could you not love a girl like that. ;__;
You did the prompt more than justice, hon, and I'm so glad you took the time out of your schedule to create something so beautiful. Thank you thank you thank you THANK YOU SO MUCH AGAIN. /DROWNS YOU IN HUGS <33333333 \;w;/
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I'm so glad you liked it! 8'DDD
Auuugh I loved writing this, and kudos to you for coming up with such a brilliant prompt. This is exactly the sort of stimulus I need to get my Pokemon muse back in action, ahahaha. They dynamic is so lovelyyyyy I have to agreee. And sgdfhdkjflhfd there does need to be more love for them.
Oh, no, it was my pleasure (: -HUGS BACK-
I also noticed you made the Pokedad and School Kid Billy prompts ahahahah. GOOD LORD THEY ARE EPIC and I am hoping I can somehow fill them because good lord the potential for them is huuuuge *u*
Especially loving the Pokedad prompt oh my god. Win.
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Thanks for reading and reviewing! ♥♥
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I still haven't gotten too far into PokeSpec, but I think you did a great job with the characters! It made me laugh. Especially when Blue just grabs Yellow and drags her off to give them their private time. Haha. Really cute!
And the second one was just beautiful in every way. You wrote Janine's struggle to keep up with her father so well. ♥♥ nnnghh. I can honestly say I got a little teary-eyed.
Yes, of course I can, she responds as stoutly as possible, despite the shortness of her breath, the fatigue which burns slowly and sluggishly in the coils of her aching muscles.
Right here. ;----;
And the ending dialogue was fantastic. Great job. ♥
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Ahaha, well, nothing wrong with that x) It's been ages since I tried to keep up with it anyways; doubtless much has unfolded since the last time I read it. But thanks! Sometimes, idk, it feels weird for me to write the PokeSpe!verse characters. I just...can't :/
♥♥♥♥ Oh man yes. As I've said, the prompt was absolutely lovely, and it was great filling it out :D I got a bit teary-eyed myself when writing it x) Because, well, they definitely care for one another, but it's probably not really in their natures to demonstrate that aspect.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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