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kingdom hearts -- subaudition

Sep 12, 2010 20:49

title: subaudition
wordcount: 2215
rating: PG
warnings: spoilers for birth by sleep
summary: Subaudition; an act or instance of understanding or mentally supplying something not expressed.
notes: Related to Altercations and Burial.

( The word itself comes almost directly from the Latin )

genre: not so bad after all, character: xigbar, genre: rad bromance, *warning: spoilers, genre: silly character stuff, genre: backstory ahoy, character: organisation xiii, genre: rad bromance oops i lied, genre: lexaeus is the only sane man, *fandom: kingdom hearts, genre: existential kids korner

Comments 19

06seconds_left September 15 2010, 03:39:04 UTC

Do you ever get tired of people saying how much they love your writing? Because if you do, I can stop. (Just kidding)

Hmm. I really like this piece. Again, partly because it was from Xigbar's point of view. The tone of it's very nice. And I love how you compared the people they are now with the people they were then. The way they interact with each other. How they've changed. For some reason, I especially like the fact that Xaldin was eating satsumas. And slightly crazy Zexion is really cute. But Xigbar. His character is so spot-on. XD

Great job!

scenotaphs September 15 2010, 12:59:24 UTC

o//////o ERRR WELLL. If anything, they encourage me to be consistent ahaha, and not to slack off or get lazy with my writing. If people start telling me my writing's stale and tired, it's definitely cause for concern!

Writing about the original six is brilliant! There's so much left unsaid and unknown about that, and it's fun to play around with what we've got. Superimposing their 'new' selves over who they once were makes for, well, many ideas. Though it leaves a lot of questions to mind, too.

Anything from Xigbar's point of view is instantly win, imo! He's hilarious x) Though I suppose he does overexaggerate things. Like twelve-year-old!Zexion. Couuugh.

Yeees! Xaldin demolishing a little army of satsumas whilst Xigbar rambles and complains on and on is like how I view their friendship. Sssh don't tell anyone but that is totally my favourite line in the whole thing ahaha.

Thank you so much! ♥♥

06seconds_left September 16 2010, 08:52:35 UTC

Ah, I see. Then I will continue to blabber about your awesome-ness. :)

I totally agree. They are made of win. Hopefully, BBS will make them even more interesting. And not less cool. Although I have to admit it was quite disappointing to find out Axel's other was from Twilight Town. But this was mostly made up for by the discovery of his relationship with Saix. So I guess I'm good. :D

True true. It must be because of the way he sees the world. Ah, but exaggeration is practically his middle name!

Haha. That's very true. I don't know what it's like in BBS, but I still think of those two as really good friends.

You're welcome. :3

scenotaphs September 16 2010, 10:24:30 UTC

oAo only if you want to! Honestly, you're too kind :D

Yessss oh god. I wish I had a PSP :/ maybe once I get into uni haha. Though I'm quite sad that the Org. themselves are pretty much dead and gone now, unless they're being brought back in future games. Waitomgsh, Lea was from Twilight Town? Dude, I totally missed that! But the friendship was sweet. Seeing Isa as he was, and not the cold, unapologetic Saix threw me, hehe.

Yes! A Xigbar who doesn't overexaggerate doesn't seem quite the same.

Same here C: they just seem like...well, drinking buddies, amongst other things! Haha.

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miyuse September 15 2010, 12:45:12 UTC

(I'm so sorry I have to reply to your message right here but I can't send you one because of your privacy options and I can't think of any other way.)

Sorry, I didn't introduce myself when adding you! :) Actually I was looking for Kingdom Hearts fanfictions and yours really seemed interesting. (I found your journal via khfanfiction.) I haven't had the time to read them yet annnd that's why I added you: to remind me I had to read them all. \o/ I'm playing BBS right now and it makes me feel like reading about the Organization.
(I hope this isn't too awkward. Sorry if it is, though.)

Well, have a nice day! :)

scenotaphs September 15 2010, 12:53:25 UTC

Oh no! That's okay! Gah ashdghlfd. I still don't know how to fiddle with my LJ settings :C

Ahh! I see I see! Well, yes, I write predominantly KH fics, though I dabble in a few other fandoms, including Pokemon. Am hoping to play Persona soon because it looks like a brilliant series *u* So hopefully you'll have more things to read in the future.

Have fun with BbS! Though if you don't want too many spoilers you might have to skive off a few of my fics for now x) The Organisation are brilliant characters to write/read about indeed!

You too! And on that note, I wish you happy reading! ♥

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scenotaphs September 22 2010, 15:52:51 UTC

First up, thank you for dropping by! :D Welcome to LJ and the KH fanfic community (:

FFFF sadfghj; t-thank you so much! ; u ; Seriously, just...thanks for reading, and your review, which is too kind, too kind. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and that you found it to be properly in-character.

♥ thanks for stopping by!

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scenotaphs September 23 2010, 06:39:08 UTC

Oh, but I appreciate it nonetheless! :D I didn't quite like it as much as Burial, since this started out as a drabble too, but in the end became quite long.

*u* I always do love to hear what my readers have to say about my work - it gives me opportunity to improve, or at least ensure that everything new I come up with meets the same standards, ahaha.