kingdom hearts -- bone garden
title: bone garden
wordcount: 1285
rating: PG-13
summary: Why have reverence for the dead and the gone, for the condemned and the hopeless, when nothing can help them by that point?
notes: Somewhat-based on that myth of how cherry blossoms originally had white petals, which were stained pink by the blood of corpses buried at their roots. Interpret this ( Read more... )
wordcount: 1285
rating: PG-13
summary: Why have reverence for the dead and the gone, for the condemned and the hopeless, when nothing can help them by that point?
notes: Somewhat-based on that myth of how cherry blossoms originally had white petals, which were stained pink by the blood of corpses buried at their roots. Interpret this ( Read more... )
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Ahaha, well, I find that darker edge of them to be the most compelling to write about. It's a shame that their true essence tends to be disregarded, in favour of portraying them as hideously ooc.
Thank you muchoes for reading and reviewing! C:
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I'm glad you think so. This has got to be one of my favourite pieces thus far, hehe. I know, a bit bigheaded of me, but idk, for once I managed to get to the point without dithering too much.
Poor Luxord! In my fics, he always seems to be the one who has to be confronted with all the twisted darkness of his cohorts. What with Xigbar nattering on about burying one's past (in Burial, teehee), and now Marluxia yammering on about how human bones make brilliant plant fertiliser, it's amazing how he hasn't decided to call it quits with the Organisation ahaha. I guess it works because he's probably one of the more grounded members, as opposed to, well, pretty much all of the others.
Oh, pshaw, don't say that! You write brilliantly as well! I love your drabbles honestly. ♥♥
Yess! Marluxia is alluring like a...err, rose, but several times more dangerous - all barbed thorns and poison petals. Er, yes, something like that!
♥ Thank you again~~!
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LOL! So true! Now that you mention it, Luxord must be thinking his fellow Nobodies are all insane. XDDD But he's far too awesome to be swayed by something like that. So he ain't quitting. No sir. XD
Aw, thanks. :'D I try me best with them. And I'm working on improving! You are now one of the writers I put up there in my head, along with Mr Rabbitprint and uh, Ms/Mrs Sister_Coyote.
Heehee. A rose. Nice. XD
No problem! :D
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; n ; I'll have to make it up to him sometime, just write something where he's not taken on this mindtrip by the others. But it's quite a hilarious contrast, haha. Maybe that's why he's not depicted that often in fanon. He's too grounded, along with Lexaeus. No quitting indeed! He's got more steel in his spine than that, for sure.
You're definitely going along very well, then! And, omgsh, that's the best thing anyone can say to me ;A; I'm a huge fan of Rabbitprint's work, though I haven't read anything by Sister_Coyote yet. You're too kind! ; u ;
Haha, yes. Am currently at a bit of a loss as to what else I can better compare him to.
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That alone is the best way anyone can describe my work to me ;____; Thank you so much!
*u*!!! Yes, yes, I'm really glad to hear it! My goodness this was a monster. It started out, again, as a drabble and before I knew it, I was just writing and writing and writing. Marluxia's such a creepy character, however way you look at him. -shiver-
*////* Eee, I'm glad everyone was IC. I've yet to play any of the main KH games other than Days, orz, so all my characterisation is from the Wiki, cutscenes, and other people's fics.
Thank you for reading & reviewing! ♥♥
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Hehe, thank you! I'm really working on getting myself a PS2 and possibly a PSP.
x) So what indeed, ahahaha. Well, I must say, thank you muchly! It's still very much appreciated.
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