pokémon -- ohio is for lovers (1/2)

[scenotaphs]

title: ohio is for lovers
wordcount: 2858
rating: PG 
summary: Twenty secrets, twenty different ways to say I love you; different people have different ways of expressing themselves, and it doesn't have to be through words.

Comments

[aoimaboroshi]

Wonderful <3 Please keep writing, I enjoy reading your stories so much.

[scenotaphs]

T-thank you! ; u ; I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for reading and reviewing! ❤

[neutralize]

Ahhh, wow, so many characters and wonderful stories to go with it! These are awesome, bby ♥

[scenotaphs]

:D! I-I'm glad you think so! Haha, Pokemon does have a great cast of characters to write about, that is for sure. I'm glad you like the drabbles!

Hee, thank you, thank you ❤❤❤

[scenotaphs]

I didn't think it was a common pairing, because I could hardly find anything on it ; n ; BUT I FOUND ANOTHER FAN YAY. I know you like Cyrus/Cynthia too, huhoho

Thank you, thank you, you are too kind ; u ;

[scenotaphs]

(: THANK YOU VERY VERY MUCH FOR READING. \o/

Eeee, thanks, seriously, for the feedback -- I'm glad you liked the drabbles :D

[snoaz]

I like the variety of pairings, and the drabbles make a nice reading format. You said a while ago that your writing style had changed, and I can see it here. It's definitely become more mature. Whilst that is a good thing, I do feel like sometimes you're trying to use too 'expensive' words or descriptions; I don't really know how to explain, but I guess that simpleness is trump sometimes. For that reason I also I liked the HikariJun one the best; it was touching and spot-on.

The Frantic one was also really nice, very emotionally charged; though it did remind me of Ibuberu's 'Dismantling of the Prince'.

I'll be off to read the other ten, now. Thanks for sharing these in any case, it was a nice read for sure :D

[scenotaphs]

It's good to keep an open mind about them, I guess -- that way, it's easier to write about a broader range of interactions.

Ahaha, perhaps I am! I don't know, but my style has gotten progressively more purple over the past few months. Perhaps it has something to do with my newfound love for Kingdom Hearts, and how I feel compelled to write 'darker' things for that fandom; at any rate, it is that sort of overtly intricate style that I loved all along, so I really don't know, orz.

Simpleness does go better sometimes, and that's where I return to basics and strip down my very purple prose to the bare essentials.

Hmm, yeah. But that's probably how a lot of people view their relationship - an endless loop of pushing and pulling, and much denial going on in between.

Thanks for reading and for the feedback! (: