[Side-story] Untouchable

Jul 10, 2011 05:52

Title: Untouchable
Author: b_sim
Characters/Pairings: Hyde (Hideto), GACKT (Satoru)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Friendship
Summary: The first time Satoru sees Hideto fight as himself and not as the demon, he's terrified.
Notes: I'm killing two prompts with one fic! ♥
Prompt: from saurgristiel - First time Satoru is truly afraid of Hideto, from hyde_cest - First time Satoru sees ( Read more... )

genre: friendship, char: hideto, scattered petals: side-story, rating: pg-13, char: satoru

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saurgristiel July 10 2011, 22:45:40 UTC
Wooooo!!!! *saves for later*

Lol, have you noticed that pattern? XD

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b_sim July 11 2011, 13:09:11 UTC
Lol, we're all busy, I guess. :P

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saurgristiel July 11 2011, 13:17:42 UTC
I like to read things before sleeping, so when you post at this time, it's a long time until bed XD

♥ very nice. Poor Satoru *and kinda poor dude that got the crap kicked out of him o_O* but yay for Hideto coming to Satoru's aid even though they haven't known each other for very long ^_^

It felt just a little rushed/quick, but that might just be me. *take a gander at Thin Line too. There are some... Interesting things in there XD. I liked that too and I really loved their fight in the forest ^^d*

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b_sim July 11 2011, 14:39:40 UTC
even though they haven't known each other for very long

Hideto and Satoru are soul mates. That's the best way I can describe them, haha. From day one, they've been bound together. That's what their relationship is like. ♥

I guess that's true, how I was writing about the bully one paragraph and then suddenly Hideto's beating him up, lol.

Glad you enjoyed Thin Line! Definitely trying to make it better than Scattered Petals. ♥

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dohai_love July 10 2011, 22:50:47 UTC
YAAAY SCATTERED PETALS SIDE STORIES. :DDD

Gosh, Satoru is such a baby! XD Instead of being happy that Hideto is sticking up for him, he's all freaked out about him being angry, like he's never seen anger displayed before. He did say thank you at least though, but I think he took the whole situation too seriously. Hideto on the other hand, is awesome again lol, what a prick that kid is, he was just jealous at how pretty Satoru is. Hater. XDD HIDETO Y U SO AMAZING SRSLY. I love the sweet ending, with him stroking Satoru's hair and I LOVE the last line as well. <333

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b_sim July 11 2011, 13:11:40 UTC
like he's never seen anger displayed before

It's because up until then, the thought that Hideto might have his own angry side (one that isn't Haido) hadn't occurred to Satoru. To him, Hideto angry = Haido so when it didn't turn out that way, it scared him because he had no idea how to deal with it. ♥

Pfft, Hideto = awesome. It's a fact of life!

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dohai_love July 11 2011, 18:05:29 UTC
Ah, I see. :O

lol, totally!

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larkir July 11 2011, 00:56:22 UTC
D'aw <3 So cuuuute~ I love Hideto, I really do~

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b_sim July 11 2011, 14:37:23 UTC
I'm glad you liked it. ♥

I think it'll be a while before I post another fic because I have a deadline to meet and I gotta pour all my work into this project. So I'm glad you enjoyed this. ♥

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love_teddies July 11 2011, 15:12:53 UTC
awwww. hideto is so sweet. that yuji guy had it coming. no ones bullies satoru

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b_sim July 12 2011, 13:56:42 UTC
Hell yeah. You can be sure that no one else dare bully Sa-chan again after that. :P

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