A (Late!) Birthday Gift for Shiv!

[scatteredlogic]

Dearest Shiv, I'm so very sorry that this took so long. It grew and grew and became an entirely different story than the one I'd originally set out to tell, but I hope you enjoy it anyway. ~smooches~

My very grateful thanks to whitemunin, who beta read this at the last minute, and it's not been Brit-picked, since the gift is for my Brit-picker. ;P

Comments

[shiv5468]

Oh lovely. Lovely lovely.

Poor Lucius, no wonder he wouldn't agree to play wiht you! Losing the Manor, and only being used for sex! And to keep Severus happy.

But just right, the reparations.

Thank you!

[scatteredlogic]

~does happy dance~ I'm glad you liked it!

Yes, Lucius did get something of the short end of the stick in this. I'm not sure what happened. That wasn't what I set out to write!

[sabrebabe]

This was *wonderful*!!! How I wish I could do that with my house from time to time (with a nice wand to make things right again, of course). And poor Lucius, reduced to a one-nighter just to make Severus happy.

And Hermione is right, he's getting *most* of what she took from him back again. Minus the Drawing Room, of course. Would probably make the house elves roll over with glee to fix it all up again, though. :D

[scatteredlogic]

Oh, thank you so much! I'm so happy that you liked it!

Hee! It would be great to be able to trash things at will, wouldn't it? And then put them back without too much effort.

I'd considered having Lucius mention that the house-elves would have to fix everything, but I needed to finish it, and that would have taken the story off on another tangent. LOL

[droxy]

Scary and brilliant! Wonderfully crafted characters too.

[scatteredlogic]

Whoo hoo! Thank you so much! I'm pleased that you think so!

[inspired_ideas]

Ooh, how grand.

[scatteredlogic]

Thank you!

[anonymous]

Rita or Callalily.

[scatteredlogic]

Um, okay?