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[oneshot] Parallel Hearts (Strangers on a Train: The Post-it Chronicles)

Oct 13, 2011 13:20

Title: Parallel Hearts (Strangers on a Train: The Post-it Chronicles)

Author: Luna (dreamweavernyx)

Rating: PG

Genre: Fluff

Pairing: Ohmiya

Summary: AU. Slowly, Nino becomes aware of someone else’s life running exactly parallel to his own.

Notes: Written for reel_johnny at the Mini Reel challenge.
Music video used: Bad Day - Daniel Powter(I should have posted it much ( Read more... )

character: ninomiya kazunari, type: oneshot, pairing: ninomiya kazunari x ohno satosh, character: ohno satoshi, genre: fluff, fandom: arashi

Comments 28

nightbaron079 October 13 2011, 05:58:23 UTC

D'aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

dreamweavernyx October 13 2011, 06:03:36 UTC

♥ Thanks for reading! :D

nightbaron079 October 13 2011, 06:03:42 UTC

Oh hi I'm first xD

nightbaron079 October 13 2011, 06:02:59 UTC

This is just so sweet~ and Post-it stories are always nice to read :3

I keep smiling when I read a name. They don't really particularly know each other here (Arashi, and the other people as well) but the way they're written with their distinct characteristics still made it feel real.

Aiba's insistence on the game program, for example. Or that Hachiko-and-Nino artwork from the DnA days :)

I'll end up quoting your whole fic if I was asked to choose what parts I like, so I'll leave it as this: You are an awesome writer and I really love your works. Though I'm more of a silent/shadow reader, your fics make me want to continue improving my writing as well. *showers heart cookies*

Otsukare-chan :)

dreamweavernyx October 13 2011, 06:05:03 UTC

Oh, missed this bit.

Thank you so much! ♥

haruchaan October 13 2011, 09:28:42 UTC

Reading this made my day 10x better. Describing how I love it would just ruin the effect lol, but basically the flow and pace of the fic is perfect. Not to mention being able to picture the OCs interacting ever so naturally with Ohno and Nino.

Thanks for making me smile with such a sweet story :)

dreamweavernyx October 13 2011, 09:30:11 UTC

Actually, there were no OCs in this fic - it's 100% real actors and singers and others. :D

Thank you so much for reading! ♥

haruchaan October 13 2011, 10:02:28 UTC

Ah lol yes. The OCs I meant was Nakai, Taichi, Shoko-tan(fave), etc... I didn't know characters aren't called OCs if they're based on the real people. XD

Thanks to Utaban and Nino's bratty senpai/kouhai relationship with Taichi it was fun imagining the office interaction.

racanai October 13 2011, 13:51:03 UTC

THIS is so overly cute and sweet and romantic that I have no words to express how much I love it! <3
The references to D & G & Odoroki are really funny! ^^
It's going straight to my memories! =D

dreamweavernyx October 13 2011, 13:53:43 UTC

♥ Thank you so much for reading!

platinum28 October 13 2011, 15:32:20 UTC

So cute~! The transitioning was really smooth for me, it was so easy to read despite the length. I also loved the staffing, it was hilarious. XD

Thanks for sharing! :D

dreamweavernyx October 14 2011, 12:53:48 UTC

Thanks for reading~♥