A Bouquet of Pansies

[scarysnapey]

Title: A Bouquet of Pansies
Author: scarysnapey
Word Count: 361
Rating: G
Prompt: quill_it Table 50.4: Prompt 026. Gift
A/N: This had a whole Severus monologue in it, but I ended up cutting it out.

Comments

[reg_flint]

It seemed quite real to me, Pansy's frustration, anger and sadness. I think you're fine in this fic, but you may have chosen an Gryffindor, all too Gryffindor pairing.

I am interested to see how things progress. I like McGonagall for her sharpness and Pansy for her determination. I'm sure you'll do them proud.

[scarysnapey]

I kind of cheated by having McGonagall asleep, but I'm find this pairing a bit overwhelming. Add to that my newfound inability to write unredeemed Draco, and I'm just struggling to get anything done proper.

*scurries off to write in character McGonagall*

[reg_flint]

Best of luck.
*ducks a frying pan at such confidence*

A Bouquet of Pansies

[dexstarr]

Oh my. I think you're going to make me *like* Pansy. This was short, sweet, and well done. I felt bad for Pansy, for her nervousness, and the hint of some relationship with Minerva. And the accidental (or maybe it wasn't bahahah!) combustion of the other flowers was a great touch, a good clue to her feelings.

Re: A Bouquet of Pansies

[scarysnapey]

Oh, well now I have to make a concentrated effort to convert you to a Pansy lover. *grins evilly*

Re: A Bouquet of Pansies

[dexstarr]

Yeah, I have a feeling you'll convert me :)

I watched HBP again tonight, and I'm liking the girl who plays Pansy. I'm doomed.