Comments | scarypants: Fade Together (Remus/Sirius, Remus/OC, R)

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Fade Together (Remus/Sirius, Remus/OC, R)

Oct 08, 2005 21:19

Fade Together

Author: scarypantsPairing: Remus/Sirius (if you look hard enough!), a little mention of Remus/OC which is unfortunately necessary, but painful ( Read more... )

fic, remus/sirius

Comments 31

keep writing rissabby October 9 2005, 04:51:40 UTC

Wow, I am surprised that this is your first fic. The majority of the story, from the line, "Remus never calls him Padfoot now." has a beautiful voice; you sound like a mature writer who has spent a lot of time and thought on these characters ( ... )

Re: keep writing scarypants October 9 2005, 17:49:03 UTC

Yes! My idea for the sequel is that Remus never does truly forgiven Sirius while they're still in school, and when they graduate they live together in the same flat (due to financial reasons for Remus and Sirius, well Sirius just wants Moony to forgive him) and the situation finally sort of comes to a boil where Sirius sort of corners Remus and the latter, *ahem*, attacks Sirius--sexually, of course. And they become sort of angry lovers with the war as a backdrop.

Problem is I actually have to write all that myself. Haha. :D It does seem like a daunting task at this point in time ( ... )

dymphna_gold October 9 2005, 05:02:32 UTC

This is absolutely lovely. Hard to believe it's your first fic. And I didn't find any grammar problems of any sort, and the tense changes worked really well, I thought. I hope you do write a sequel. I'd love to read it.

scarypants October 9 2005, 17:05:33 UTC

Thank you, thank you! I was really nervous about posting the story, but everyone has been just lovely.

And I would love to write a sequel, if my perpetual laziness and writer's block doesn't get to me first! It still feels a bit unfinished to me, and I really don't want poor Sirius to suffer, so I guess I'll have to suck it up and write it...

musicianatheart October 9 2005, 22:20:46 UTC

This is wonderful! It's always a tough subject to deal with (post-Prank) and you have handled it wonderfully.

Also, resident grammar-nazi offers herself as beta, if you'd like. feel free to contact me at musicianatheart@gmail or funnification on aim. will feel honored to beta great writer.

♥

scarypants October 10 2005, 19:14:49 UTC

Thank you so much! I might have to take you up on that offer; I'm in the middle of writing the sequel now and the present tense/tense change is killing me. I know I'll be in good company with a (fellow) grammar-nazi! :D

p.s. I actually thought you were asking me to contact you for "funnication" on AIM. Lol. Silly me!

faith_girl222 October 10 2005, 06:46:22 UTC

Oh, that was marvelous. Great Sirius voice, nice handling of Remus' orientation and I quite like your James - he obviously knows what's what between Remus and Sirius, even if they don't.

scarypants October 10 2005, 19:13:12 UTC

thank you, thank you! i'm so glad that you enjoyed it and that you felt the characterisation was okay--i was quite worried about that bit.

and yes, poor Sirius and Remus, puppies in denial! :D

Beautiful! painted_fall October 10 2005, 18:23:49 UTC

I LOVED this story. Excellent, excellent characters. Added to my memories. =D

PLEASE write a sequel. <3

Re: Beautiful! scarypants October 10 2005, 19:11:40 UTC

Thank you so much!! I am actually slogging through the sequel now, it looks like it's going to be quite a bit longer than this one and so I'm kind of dreading the editing and the actual writing bit, lol.

Franz Ferdinand is awesome, of course. :D

P.S. I love your icon! Ruddy canon, indeed!