five first kisses

[scarletts_awry]

See? I haven’t been exaggerating the writer’s block. This has been over two weeks in the making, and it’s the only piece of fiction I’ve managed to work on. Now, I might console myself by saying it’s really five pieces, but that strikes me as a cop out

Comments

[fallen_arazil]

Oooh! Oooh, lovely. A little bit of everything, including three of my favorites (I have a lot of favorites) Danny/Flack, Danny/Aiden and Danny/Stella.

I do like the 'five things' format, as it gives a sort of general feel of the character, and how the interact, the SORT of person they are, in little bits at a time. Each of them has a sense of genuine emotion to them, and they're lovely for what they are--each a possibility. I love the competitiveness mentnioned in the Danny/Flack one, because they're both such man's men, it would have to have an element of that.

Anyway, the point is, this was lovely. ^_^

~Djinn

[scarletts_awry]

Thanks. :) I've enjoyed reading all the Five Things stories going around; writing this ended up being tricky but so worth it.

[endora_taylor]

oh, LOVE. the aiden section kicked my in the face. and mac! oh, mac. oh, danny.

amazing.

[scarletts_awry]

Thanks. :) I was a little worried about the Aiden section because I've written so little of her. Mac and Danny are just... inevitable.

[lblikesbagels]

I love you. Lol. I love how you've captured all five of them perfectly, and of course Danny. And I enjoy that Lindsay wasn't included. <3
Obviously I'm a little biased, but I love the Flack one best. :P It's just that... that's exactly what they are to me. Just all rolled up into those few paragraphs. A mask of alcohol and late nights at the pub, and rough sloppy make-out sessions on someone's couch or the sidewalk or a dark alley, but there's always something there beneath the surface. I just love how raw and dark they are, and you captured it so well.

Yay!

[scarletts_awry]

Thanks. I have to admit I can't abide by Lindsay in a het situation, so she was pretty much out of the question here. :D

A mask of alcohol and late nights at the pub, and rough sloppy make-out sessions on someone's couch or the sidewalk or a dark alley, but there's always something there beneath the surface.

That's a great description and exactly what I love about Danny/Flack. I don't OTP whatsoever, but the boys will always hold a special little corner of my heart since they dragged me out of lurkerdom.

[spicy_zanella]

yay! csiny fic!

esp loved danny/flack - competing til the end even though they both want the same thing - and danny/stella - i love the raw energy and sad neediness...

more please...pretty please!

[scarletts_awry]

Thank you. Danny and Flack are all about that sort of one-upmanship, and I'm really pleased with how the Danny/Stella turned out and that people like it.

[scarletts_awry]

Thank you. :)