very very belated stagesoflove round four

[scarletts_awry]

I do intend to finish up my various stagesoflove claims. Eventually

Comments

[powerof3]

I hate you for making me read Mac/Danny. You do know that, right? ;)

It's incredibly hot, and dead sexy.

Although, I did notice this "Mac presses his palms back against the wall and lets out of hoarse cry as he comes." Other than that, there's not a single thing wrong with it.

[scarletts_awry]

Um, I'm sorry? :D

And thanks for pointing out the typo.

[kelly_girl]

Nice. I love rough and dirty Danny/Mac in the alley. This had lots of angst and sex and bitterness. Great work.

[scarletts_awry]

Thanks. :) The boys are just not in a good place at that point of S1.

[scarletts_awry]

heh. That was the first part I wrote, and it seemed like a very Danny train of thought. I usually find his pov a bit more difficult to write. And thanks-- I really like writing fic on the more fucked-up and angry end of the spectrum, and I'm always kind of surprised and very happy when other people like it.

[fading_hawkeye]

Oooooooh boy.... *fans self* You know what I noticed? If Danny were to narrarate this, it would sound completely in character. Seriously. For some reason, this fic just oooozed his attitude. And ohhh God, the image of Mac having an orgasm against an alley wall because of Danny makes me wanna just melt..... Wooonderful fic!

[scarletts_awry]

Thanks. :) I typically write in a close third person, so I can try to include the pov character's voice. At the same time, as much as I love Danny I have a hard time writing him as a pov character, so thank you very much.

[spicy_zanella]

nice...as i've said, i'm not the biggest mac/danny fan but i love a sexy angsty danny anytime...esp when he's being dirty in an alley!

[scarletts_awry]

Thanks. There's just something special about angry, skanky Danny, isn't there? :D