undone

[scarletts_awry]

A quick and dirty piece of fic; a valentine's for my honey, stellaluna-.

title: Undone
with: Sophie/Nate
rated: adult
herein: She wonders which one of them is control of this.
disclaim: Leverage is owned by John Rogers, Dean Devlin, et al. I can't wait to own the dvds, but I will never own more than that.

Comments

[stellaluna_]

Oh, hon. I love this. It's amazing, and hot, and difficult -- all the things that a Nate/Sophie piece should be. I love the way you delineate the tensions between them and the things that they both want/need out of this. The barely suppressed anger makes it work so wonderfully.

Also, did I mention the hot part? Because it's really amazingly hot.

Thank you! ♥ ♥

[scarletts_awry]

I'm very happy you enjoyed this, of course. <3

There really is so much complication going on between them, and like we've been talking about, they are caught in this cycle...

...and they really are incredibly hot.

[ijemanja]

even if it is just to play her in a different way

Oh god yes. That's exactly how screwed up and wrong I want this pairing to be. I freaking love this a lot. Really, intensely hot, too.

[scarletts_awry]

Thank you. I love that their relationship is complicated and screwed up.

[angstbunny]

... SQUIRM.

Yeah, who doesn't like Nate on his knees. But I like the tension there, that though Nate is the one pleasuring her, the one on his knees, he's still holding control. Sophie still isn't sure of her footing when it comes to where she stands with him.

Nate’s hand is so tight that she’ll have soft fingerprint bruises on the inside of her thigh. She’ll touch them tomorrow.

GUH. Not just that he'll leave bruises, but that she will reminisce on them the next day.

Nate’s always asking to be caught.

That is one hell of a line. It says something about Nate on, like, four different levels.

Nate’s too drunk to get it up half the time, but that never slows him down.

Haha, okay, thanks for that. Seriously. When it comes to Nate and sex, this is an issue most of us are just gonna handwave, myself included. But I'm glad you got the balls to bring it up.

Sophie likes him on his knees, god damn it, even if it is just to play her in a different way

Oh, Sophie.

[scarletts_awry]

Thank you. My Stel, who I wrote this for, pointed out a while back that Nate and Sophie should be having a lot of kinky control issue sex, and I just had to agree with her. :-) Oral sex is great for that sort of dynamic, because done right, the person going down is in control...

And Nate is *so* always asking for it. :-)

[theoriginal_ist]

Bwah. So lovely, so hot. I don't think I can add anything more than what's already been said, but this was wonderful. Seriously. The tension, the anger, the passion... It's just as screwed up as they are in the series. Great job with it, really.

[scarletts_awry]

Thank you. I love having two such sexy and screwed up characters, and I'm happy if I'm doing them justice here. :-)

[supergossipgirl]

Amazing. And sexy as hell.

[scarletts_awry]

Thanks. :-)