bsi: contaminated

[scarletts_awry]

stellaluna- has invited me to be an official co-writer of the BSI verse with her. This is my first official entry.

title: Contaminated
with: Flack, Danny
rated: R
herein: He’s thinking nownownow, get this shit off of me
disclaim: I only own the dvds; everything belongs to Zuiker, CBS, et al.

Comments

[limmenel]

I love you and I love your writing and I love this 'verse, so this is, like, ultimate love.

Oh Flack. Oh Danny. Oh boys. ♥

[scarletts_awry]

Thank you! I'm having an inordinate amount of fun playing with this verse. :)

[sunhawk]

Ooooo that was an interesting set of visuals *g*

[scarletts_awry]

Thanks!

[neviditelny]

Oooohh.... Awesome!

[scarletts_awry]

Thanks. :)

[stellaluna_]

Okay, see, this right here? This is why I asked you. *nodnod*

I love how all of this is this kind of headlong rush of panic and pain and almost-violence, and it's such a visceral thing that we're right there with Flack, right there with the fear and hurt and anger.

One of the most disturbing lines was this one: Last week he had cut open a peach to find it spongy and grey. For saying everything without saying it, you know?

*hearts you*

[scarletts_awry]

Thanks. And thanks again for letting me play with this verse; it's an awful lot of fun.

*hearts you back*

[talulababy]

Ohhh!!! I love this verse. And your writing is as amazing as always.

[scarletts_awry]

Thanks. It's an awful lot of fun to play in this 'verse. :)