Comments | scarletts_awry: "pretty fingers holding fast"

scarletts_awry

"pretty fingers holding fast"

Aug 19, 2007 22:15

title: Maybe It’s Your Violent Past
with: main csi:ny cast; various pairings listed before each ficlet
rated: NC-17 overall
herein: a loosely affiliated set of ficlets charting the summer between S3 and S4: for summer-bits
disclaim: I only own the dvds; everything belongs to Zuiker, CBS, et al.
note: largely inspired by Low’s “Violent Past” (from drums ( Read more... )

genre: gen, char: stella bonasera, tone: avalanche, fic, char: sheldon hawkes, genre: stand alone, tone: subtext, tone: inevitable, genre: het, genre: ficlet, genre: boyslash, tone: disconnect, char: lindsay monroe, char: don flack, tone: memory, char: adam ross, fandom: csi:ny, char: mac taylor, char: danny messer, tone: porn, genre: girlslash

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scarletts_awry August 30 2007, 01:02:22 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad the touch of timespan and the connection between the ficlets work, because I knew I wanted there to be some sort of connection or arc, but I couldn't plan it at the time. It really emerged organically as I was writing. Frankly, I'm still pleasantly surprised with how the piece turned out.

twincy August 20 2007, 08:59:34 UTC

I can't read this right now because there are parents looking over my shoulder, but that song? Is awesome. *loves*

scarletts_awry August 30 2007, 00:56:17 UTC

Isn't it just?

mondeo August 20 2007, 10:23:37 UTC

These are really really good. You've got all the characters' voices down really well, and I love the little connections between all ficlets. I do feel a bit sorry for Adam and Hawkes though, since everyone else gets to sleep with two people and they have no one. Still, beautiful work. I couldn't even pick a favourite.

scarletts_awry August 30 2007, 00:59:18 UTC

Thank you. I'm still pleasantly surprised by the connections that emerged and how the whole piece turned out.

Well... Stella only gets to sleep with Lindsay. :D I know, the fact that Adam and Hawkes weren't sleeping with anyone crossed my mind while I was writing, but I have a hard time with the credibility of pieces where *everyone* is literally sleeping with everyone.

jalabert August 21 2007, 02:33:01 UTC

Poignant, sad and amusing, little stories. I too, was drawn in by the way they were interwoven. Good read.

scarletts_awry August 30 2007, 00:52:33 UTC

Thank you. :) I wanted there to be some kind of connecting thread, but it only emerged as I was writing. I'm glad it worked.

seraphina_snape August 21 2007, 16:41:47 UTC

Lovely ficlets. Especially the last two. I really liked the melancholic feel of the Hawkes ficlet, and the Stella/Lindsay one was just hot.

~ sera

scarletts_awry August 30 2007, 00:54:19 UTC

Thanks. Especially after this third season, Hawkes strikes me as having a very quietly meancholy side to him. And, well, in my world Lindsay is gay, so... :)