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scarlettquinn

Of Monsters and Men 2/2

Feb 11, 2010 11:51

Title: Of Monsters and Men 2/2
Characters: Hellstrom/OC
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: QT owns everything important. (in the fic, anyway)
Warnings: In this fic: Explicit themes, rape, implied non-con orgasm, violence, general heir of creeper.
Summary:Lila's life had been broken into two parts: before the occupation and after

( He was still watching her, his eyes cataloging every muscle twinge. Lila felt like a struggling butterfly pinned in place in a boy's shadow box. )

omam, part two

Comments 10

street_spirit01 February 11 2010, 21:36:00 UTC

wow definitely shocked, i did not know about this at all. It was still very well written and although sad it was good to read and educating. thank you for sharing, and i love your description of the house/objects/details etc

scarlettquinn February 12 2010, 02:27:12 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. And yeah, when it's all said and done... I totally want that house!

murdered_beauty February 12 2010, 03:17:42 UTC

This is absolutely mind blowing even if it's such a dreading topic. Your writing is lovely. It's very well done and it's so Hellstorm as disturbing that is.

It's sad to see such a strong willed person as Lila to be broken down. Poor women.

scarlettquinn February 12 2010, 17:30:32 UTC

Thanks, I worked really hard to keep him in character, I'm glad it showed. And yeah, it's a really astounding topic if you ever read into it. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed!

yourbigmouth February 16 2010, 08:28:43 UTC

Wow..this is an amazing piece of work !
I study history and find the lengths that the Nazis were willing to go to fascinating

For some odd reason I have a soft spot for Hellstrom
... hopefully there will be more jems like this in the future :)

scarlettquinn February 16 2010, 15:03:53 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm really excited that people enjoyed this one. And there are other things in the works so hopefully you'll get your wish. ;)

deborahkla March 8 2010, 09:22:36 UTC

I've just printed this out and am looking forward to reading it. I thought Part I was quite well-written I didn't know Part II was out there! I've friended you to ensure I get notices of any other fiction you write. :-)

I first read about the Lebensborn program more than 25 years ago. There was a heartrending documentary about 20 years ago, of parents still trying to find their children after the war.

scarlettquinn March 8 2010, 21:38:40 UTC

Thanks, I can't wait to hear your thoughts on it!

deborahkla March 8 2010, 22:02:09 UTC

I read this last night before I went to bed. I didn't find it shocking or offensive. Sad, yes. I'm quite definitely interested in reading more ( ... )

auroraapril April 26 2010, 09:08:22 UTC

Wow. Very powerful and affecting! I must say it was beautifully written. And I had no idea about the history behind it! I did enjoy reading it very much, then I got to the end and read the footnote about its reality. It is a bit shocking, but I really respect the message you had about how we should remember the true horror of the Nazi reign. Well done!