Hahahah I love how they're all...well... made-human here. I wuff your Sirius. He's hysterical. And Remus is so...shy. It's cute. Congrats to James for getting laid. Remus's first kiss with Lily is socute!♥ I'm sorry but I can't see them sitting around in their boxers. Sirius...maybe. Remus? No. XD LOVE YOU! Kenzie
I'm not sure I know what the first sentence means, Kenzie. xD I hoped I did him all right. I was acting like Sheobox-Sirius over the whole thing. Remus is just cute because he is Remus and Remus is cute. I'm sure he'd thank you. Yay. <3 LOVE YOUUUUU.
I'm about to kill Shoebox. Mostly cause it writes in present-tense and I despise present-tense ('cept when Katie does it ♥!)
...and I've never even glanced at Shoebox. XD
and by "made human" I mean they're not all grown-up and stuffy and someone OTHER THAN HARRY FRICKEN POTTER has thought processes (they're more like broken thought chains of events with Harry, though). In any case, I heart you more than JK! (I love how us fans think we're on a first-two-initial basis with her xD) YOU wouldn't destroy my OTP, would you???? :D
Hello I heard that you great big idiot, hmm. Sure. SURE you like my present tense. Yes. I can tell. Yes.
Never talking to you again, Your lover.
(did you appreciate my lack of punctuation? it seared my eyes. You probably liked it as much as you like my present tense which is NOT AT ALL you great bloody Slytherin liar.)
That was very strange. I have never before read a Sirius/Remus or a Gay story before. Interesting. In my head during the whole thing I could just imagine Chace Crawford (Remus) and Teddy Gieger (Sirius) making out. BAD MENTAL PICTURES!
Kinda cute though. Especially the lillyness and remussness. I think I like them together but in the end James will always belong with Lily.
And as always the story was written so freaking well. :D
My friends and I have a Fan Fiction of the Month challenge thing with each other. This month (June) my challenge was Sirius/Remus. It's my friend's favorite ship. xD
Oh, I could write pages on how I think the Remus/Lily relationship should be dealt with. xD Because they, unlike her and the rest of the Marauders pre-James, would actually be friends and talk about prefectly things and such. Pages and pages, my dear Jackie.
Ugh. I don't like it much. It's too... scattered and all the different parts are written as if they're from different pieces and I dunno. But I'm glad you thought so.
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I wuff your Sirius. He's hysterical.
And Remus is so...shy. It's cute.
Congrats to James for getting laid.
Remus's first kiss with Lily is socute!♥
I'm sorry but I can't see them sitting around in their boxers. Sirius...maybe. Remus? No. XD
LOVE YOU!
Kenzie
P.S. Remus's dream was REALLY creepy.
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I hoped I did him all right. I was acting like Sheobox-Sirius over the whole thing.
Remus is just cute because he is Remus and Remus is cute.
I'm sure he'd thank you.
Yay. <3
LOVE YOUUUUU.
PS: Shoebox thing. xD
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Mostly cause it writes in present-tense
and I despise present-tense
('cept when Katie does it ♥!)
...and I've never even glanced at Shoebox. XD
and by "made human" I mean they're not all grown-up and stuffy and someone OTHER THAN HARRY FRICKEN POTTER has thought processes (they're more like broken thought chains of events with Harry, though).
In any case, I heart you more than JK! (I love how us fans think we're on a first-two-initial basis with her xD)
YOU wouldn't destroy my OTP, would you???? :D
I'LL MISS YOUUUUUU
P.S. Remus is so redundantly cute that it's cute.
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Never talking to you again,
Your lover.
(did you appreciate my lack of punctuation? it seared my eyes. You probably liked it as much as you like my present tense which is NOT AT ALL you great bloody Slytherin liar.)
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Kinda cute though. Especially the lillyness and remussness. I think I like them together but in the end James will always belong with Lily.
And as always the story was written so freaking well. :D
xx
Jackie
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Oh, I could write pages on how I think the Remus/Lily relationship should be dealt with. xD Because they, unlike her and the rest of the Marauders pre-James, would actually be friends and talk about prefectly things and such. Pages and pages, my dear Jackie.
Ugh. I don't like it much. It's too... scattered and all the different parts are written as if they're from different pieces and I dunno. But I'm glad you thought so.
xoxo <3
Marieka
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