At That Moment

[tunasheep]

At That Moment
"Because at that moment, Minho's a grey, dull, stupid businessman, salesman or whatever-man and Taemin's a bundle of frustrated teenage angst that smelled like home."
AU, Romance, Slice of Life ; NC-17 (Sexual scenes and language) ; (more or less) 10 700 words

Comments

[hazellicious]

This is really beautiful.
I love how Minho was all curious in the beginning and didn't stop trying to talk to Taemin even when the boy gave him some serious attitude. And the way Minho took Taemin home the first time, when Taemin had injured his ankle, was just really adorable.
And the whole way, how they just grew together really naturally and now Minho felt like his life was all colorful while Taemin was around... And Jonghyun bugging Minho about having a girlfriend was a nice touch (icu, ninja!jongkey!)
EVERYTHING was a nice touch, tbh, and nothing was too dramatic or too much.
Really well written, really, I enjoyed reading this a lot. ^^

Thanks for writing and sharing this! /leaves cookies

[tunasheep]

Aaahhhh. Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! > u

[phigwhig]

I really, really enjoyed this piece. It left me with a super contented feeling, like eating a warm cinnamon roll with a cup of coffee or something, all full and sweet (can I get any more corny? Probably not but it's true). c:

The pacing was perfect, the way you developed their individual personalities, the way they talk to each other--everything was unrushed and very natural feeling. Not to mention the adorable ninja!jongkey hahaha~

Basically I love your 2min and I really hope you write more. Thanks for posting~

[tunasheep]

Aaahhh. Thank you so much. ; A ;
I'm glad you enjoyeedd iittt.

I write even more in the future, thank you again! o u o

[y111]

Thank you so much for sharing this story... I absolutely adored everything about it, it seemed so realistic, it felt like I was watching a film. I could just visualize everything; it was so descriptive and flowed so well. And the ending was just perfect, loved, loved, loved it :)

[tunasheep]

Aaahhh. I'm really glad.
I actually felt like maybe I should've describe a bit more about their lives and about the five being together, but I felt it'd just be too filler-y. c:
Thank you so much for reading.
I'm glad you enjoyed it! C:

[dongwook]

Will read tomorrow

[evergreen666]

Your fic is truly gorgeous.
When I read it, it was like watch a really great drama.
I really love how you write it. How you describe every character is incredible. They look so real.
How the story just start slowly and develop to an interesting plot-line.
Every sentence got me hook up. The only thing that I regret here is that it ended already.
I really want to read some more ;)))

[tunasheep]

Ahhhh thank you so much. ; w ;
I actually thought I should've made it a little longer, but it might have gotten too filler-y.
Oh and, I wished I made more dialogues. xD
But I'm glad you liked it! I'll be sure to write more soon. c: