Comments | sboman: This n that

sboman

This n that

May 03, 2009 23:06

I seem to being seeing how much better The Book of Esther: A Faerie Tale (I added the subtitle, what do you think?) can be now that I'm revising. I start thinking, ooh, I could develop that motivation, or, I should explore this relationship, or, I should use that literary device...A lot of it comes from my most helpful critiques (thank you Steph, ( Read more... )

b. of e., wip, the journey, the goose girl, darling daughter

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sandy_williams May 4 2009, 12:25:19 UTC

Pretty dress and her hair is absolutely gorgeous!

sboman May 4 2009, 15:13:10 UTC

Thanks! She has this friend who loves to do hair - I got her to take twenty bucks, though she didn't want to be paid. They were charging close to $100 at the salons to get prom hair styles. We lucked out.

latteya May 4 2009, 13:42:33 UTC

I love the new subtitle! And I will watch anything with Matthew M. in it.

sboman May 4 2009, 15:15:23 UTC

Glad you like the subtitile - I thought it might help catch the reader's attention. I'm seriously worrying I've missed the fairy boat, though. I had an agent tell me she's swamped in fairy queries. : (

kathys_shadow May 4 2009, 13:57:23 UTC

That's a gorgeous dress! And it definitely doesn't look like it's something you could get here.

I'm glad revisions are going well.

sboman May 4 2009, 15:15:57 UTC

Thanks so much Kath.

fandoria May 4 2009, 15:48:22 UTC

Love the new subtitle! I'm glad the revisions are going so well.

And your daughter's dress and hair are gorgeous!

annpendragon May 6 2009, 23:33:20 UTC

When to stop revising? When you get the answer to that one, clue me in.

Cute dress BTW. Not as cute as the smile and head tilt of you girl. Only a teenager makes that face so well. I hope she had a blast and that Dad is recovering well.

AND in no way, shape or form should 'laundry' and 'heaven' be put in the same sentence. Unless it is 'They do not have laundry in heaven'.