Ficlet: Marks

Aug 28, 2010 11:20

Title: Marks
Author: ohwaluvusbab
Rating: PG
Words: 144
Setting: Mid-S6
Prompt: Left Over
A/N: Un-betaed, be warned!

She’s always half embarrassed, half self-satisfied, to see the scars on his otherwise indestructible body, left over from their frenzied sessions of furniture-breaking.

Evidence. Of now. Of this.

A smaller, quieter part of her feels alarm. ( Read more... )

creator: ohwaluvusbab, medium: fic, setting: b6

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diamondtook862 August 28 2010, 02:49:51 UTC
Ooh harsh ending. Nice. (btw- like the choice of italics ;) )

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ever_neutral August 28 2010, 02:52:54 UTC
Hahaha, me and my never-ending battle with italics! Glad you approve. ;)

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fangfaceandrea August 28 2010, 02:52:38 UTC
gahh so many awesome images!
Love Buffy's inner fight, the contradictions between what she wants and things she doesn't want to want and the idea of marking Spike to make it real but the fact that Spike embodies unreal is just devastating.

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ever_neutral August 28 2010, 02:54:43 UTC
Your comments are always awesome. And much appreciated! ♥

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cindergal August 28 2010, 02:55:19 UTC
Really enjoyed this! Of course, Buffy thinks she can be with Spike and not be affected by him, but she's marked as clearly as he is. Great job.

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ever_neutral August 28 2010, 02:57:51 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad it worked for you. :)

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penny_lane_42 August 28 2010, 03:01:13 UTC
Oh, that is so S6. I really don't think anyone loves and understands S6 the way you do.

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ever_neutral August 28 2010, 03:51:06 UTC
Aww! But, but, what about you? And Gabs? And everyone???

Nevertheless, the sentiment is appreciated. :)

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ever_neutral August 28 2010, 06:01:01 UTC
*nods sadly* Thanks for the feedback!

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