'Flashblind' by Quinara

Sep 11, 2013 22:21

So, I basically would have failed this month if I didn't do any poetry at all. It's Buffy in S6! Because obvs.

Prompted by Rafael Campo: The cemetery's moon a kind of drug / That makes forgetting possible.

Flashblind                              twinkle-stars surround it ( Read more... )

medium: poetry, creator: quinara, setting: b6

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waddiwasiwitch September 11 2013, 21:40:35 UTC
This is so perfectly Buffy in this period. Well done.

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quinara September 12 2013, 19:36:17 UTC
Thanks very much! :)

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brutti_ma_buoni September 11 2013, 21:40:57 UTC
Bleak. Oh, bleak. But beautiful. All those visuals of light/dark/wounds, and then nothingness. Yes. Brava!

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quinara September 12 2013, 19:36:38 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Apparently light is scary...

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bogwitch September 11 2013, 21:45:07 UTC
It's better than Keats!

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quinara September 12 2013, 19:37:02 UTC
Ooh, you flatter me...

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petzipellepingo September 11 2013, 21:48:51 UTC
it’s when you’ve only seen the shadow - then
it’s easy to forget the sun - and you,
I know you’ve long forgotten how it burns and how
the glare can carve across you, searing bright red wounds

Oooh, very nice.

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quinara September 12 2013, 19:37:12 UTC
Thank you! :)

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baphrosia September 12 2013, 00:27:34 UTC
Oh, wow. Painful, and beautiful.

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quinara September 12 2013, 19:37:27 UTC
:) I'm glad you liked it.

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