How I Met Your Father chapter 1

[sayurikimura]

Pairing: not decided yet
Rating: PG-13 so far
Disclaimer: I do not own Arashi so Johnny Oji-chan, forgive me for using your boys in this fic
Notes: I dunno yet whether I am going to continue this fic with pairing such as (your ichiban/you) or maybe I should makes each member versions but even if I writes each member version, this will be the

Comments

[vampyrrep]

some noticeable grammatical errors...but then its a good start...just keep writing and you'll be able to create better ones in the future! ganbatte!

you need a Beta reader (in fanfiction, that's someone who edits the fic for grammatical errors that you may miss or typographical errors as well)

[sayurikimura]

oh...thanks for the advice! hehe....how am I gonna find a beta?

[vampyrrep]

well.. that depends.. you may want to post that you're looking for someone to Beta for you.. ^^

[venipine]

I’ve been into blogging for quite some time and this is definitely a great post.Cheers!