I feel like the formal thing to do is reply on here, so yeah, thank you, dear! I shortened it to only 1,500 cause so much of it was crap, so it's falsely impressive, but I tried! I swear, I attempted to insert 'provocative' phrases, but they turned into clipped up lines like "Kai's fat lips sealed around Baekhyun's quivering cock, sucking up the leaky precum", and I couldn't bring myself to work that into anything without it sounding like a joke. So I'm glad you laughed, cause that's how I tried to compensate. I'll keep practicing though and (hopefully) improving. Sorry, I know you're busy, you didn't have to read this (and I feel a bit rude having asked you to) but thank you. I'm glad you liked it ^v^
YOU DOUBLE POSTED IT! and it made me super sad cause i thought there was more and then there wasn't :< you are my favorite kai write ever and kai is my favorite *^*
THANK YOU, FAVORITE SISTER! I'm glad we share a love of stupid boys. Dumb Kai is the best Kai. You should write him more so I can fangirl over him without the obstruction of my self scrutiny.
OHGAWD. hahaha omg sassy!baek is the best. lol at their dialogue and the humor. :'D it's especially hilarious because baekhyun tries to keep ending the conversation haha.
Ladies and gentlemen, the ever delicate Baekhyun!
“No, that was more for time efficiency.”
Except not, because he went zero to sixty to smashing his teeth against Baekhyun’s with a much too aggressive kiss that just about killed him.
He’d fallen onto the couch and had his shirt tugged over his head before Baekhyun could frantically smack at Kai’s shoulders and shout, “WAIT, WAIT, WAIT, HOLD ON FOR ONE FUCKING MINUTE!”
“Dear lord,” Baekhyun’s hand smeared down his blazing cheeks. “I… I don’t know. I’ve never thought about this. You need to give people time to think about these things.”
For science?
“Affections!” Kai’s voice called after. “You like me?”
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sassy!baekhyun and bitchy!jongin is the BEST oh my god i love baekhyun's character IDEKKKKKKK
also i think you copied the story twice in here?? BUT IT'S OK CUZ I READ THE WHOLE THING LMFAO
i like it bb bc holy shit 3k in one hour I CAN NEVER DO THAT bowing down to you tbh
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you are my favorite kai write ever and kai is my favorite *^*
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Ladies and gentlemen, the ever delicate Baekhyun!
“No, that was more for time efficiency.”
Except not, because he went zero to sixty to smashing his teeth against Baekhyun’s with a much too aggressive kiss that just about killed him.
He’d fallen onto the couch and had his shirt tugged over his head before Baekhyun could frantically smack at Kai’s shoulders and shout, “WAIT, WAIT, WAIT, HOLD ON FOR ONE FUCKING MINUTE!”
“Dear lord,” Baekhyun’s hand smeared down his blazing cheeks. “I… I don’t know. I’ve never thought about this. You need to give people time to think about these things.”
For science?
“Affections!” Kai’s voice called after. “You like me?”
This idiot.
/dying
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