Less than Innocent, More than Like 20/?

[sayasama]

 Title: Less Than Innocent, More than Like
Pairing: LaviYuu
Rated: PG for the moment...Just because Lavi's a bad boy >:]
Warnings: Well, it's yaoi...but you already knew that, surely. No spoilers, because this is all speculation about their past. Just don't take this like it's really their past, and you're good.
Disclaimer: Saya owns the play, but

Comments

[clueless_quark]

*nods appreciatively* I really like Kanda and Lavi/Flower dream interactions. Kanda's feelings are very well described. Can't wait to see what he'll do when he comes back to the Order. Honestly, Lavi is such an asshole for coming into Kanda's room and insulting his stuff repeatedly. XD Komui should make up a robot and punish Lavi for that. Or something.
Your updates always make me so happy. They spread LaviYuu love. :D

[sayasama]

Thank you! How will Kanda deal with Lavi when he gets back? Will he be able to with all the birthday craziness going on around?
A robot to punish Lavi...Kanda needs one of those, yes he does...

[serene_artist]

I feel sad for Kanda! I agree Lavi should be punished.....sounds alittle wrong.... I wonder how Kanda and Lavi will face each other after they come back, though that won't be for awhile. Amazing story as always~ Oh, I'm so sad you were tired while writing this for us! Sometimes I feel so greedy cause we ask you to keep writing these long entries even though they're god-like amazing! Since I read them religiously, lol.
I think I found 3 mistakes buut only remember two.
"the decided it would be best for the mission to let the finder do his job and wake them" they, just one letter off.
"while everyone was eating, Lavi check the hall once before going into Kanda’s" I think checked for past tense.
I am realllllly anticipating for the next one and I kind of hope it will be out on or nefore Dec 21, cause after that I won't be able to read it until alittle while after.....thanks again!

[sayasama]

Yes, Lavi's going into bookman mode and hurting Kanda! he must be punished!

Saya's always tired, it's not just from writing...she complains too much ^^;
Saya is honored that you look forward to reading these chapters so much.

Hopefully Saya will have it out by then, she's kinda snowed in at a friends house right now...ehe.

[serene_artist]

You're not complaining at all! What a coincidence! I was snowed in too, just in my own house. ^^

[sayasama]

you sure she's not complaining?

yeah!! Then it rained...now everything's ice...and you can feel it as the car tires slide over it...they dont even turn, they just slide...It's scary.

[wyvern_elavie]

Only 1 typo ^_^ "Maybe it wasn’t Lavi at al?" Or at least one that I can see. I'm a bit tired as well.

I like Kanda's hysterics. They're very appealing on him and it's just.. i dunno. It's something one would expect from an immature Kanda.

Though the Finder's rant at the end was just... I know how Kanda feels, basically. XP

[sayasama]

thanks for pointing that out, as always!
Yes...a little Kanda wouldn't be at composed as he is when he's older. He'll get to that level...eventually!

[kazura_uyurin]

Sigh... Lavi, don't you know it's not nice to talk behind people's back? Especially when they actually know you're doing that? Eh well. Bad Lavi. Bad Lavi. Can't wait to see what happens when Lenalee and Kanda return from their mission!

I hope Lavi doesn't really destroy the lotus literally. I hope he just means to find out all the secrets about the lotus... which I think that's the case cause he probably doesn't want to leave any clues that he's been into Kanda's room.

Can't wait for more!

[sayasama]

Yeah...stupid Lavi...He's killin' Kanda...really... Lenalee's gonna have to work hard to keep those two from killing each other. Ehe....

No, well... yes and no. He doesn't realize what it is about the flower that makes him want to break it. It's not the flower itself that's offending him, it's something else, which will be explained later. But no, for the sake of not leaving evidence, he won't.