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Rat Trap [1/6]

May 05, 2010 20:42

Title: Rat Trap [1/6]
Author/Artist: Sayasama
Character(s) or Pairing(s): Russia/US, and an "It's complicated" UK->US. Minor pairings include: LietPol, Netherlands/Canada, and GerIta. France and Prussia also make some appearances later.
Rating: PG-13 (maybe M) for sexual themes, some swearing, and later allusions to violence.
Warnings: ( Read more... )

russia, america, usuk, us, uk, russia/america, england, rat trap

Comments 33

Font hurts my eyes... anonymous May 6 2010, 01:17:26 UTC

The font in this is super tiny and totally kills my eyes. Um, normally I don't put reviews, cause like most people block the anonymous and I made an account... but like don't have time to figure out how in the heck to work it. But, I can tell from the first paragraph that it's going to be a good story, but I struggled to read just the first paragraph so please, please, please, change the font and make it easier to read. Cause I know it's going to be good, I just to want to get a headache trying to read it.

Re: Font hurts my eyes... keitorin May 6 2010, 07:43:08 UTC

Hey there! You can make the font bigger on your own by pressing Ctrl and + at the same time until it's to your desired size. Of course, this is for Firefox; I don't know about other browsers.

Re: Font hurts my eyes... anonymous May 7 2010, 02:57:45 UTC

If you like the settings in your own journal you can always add

?style=mine

to the end of the URL of any page on livejournal to make it more readable. Just make sure to delete other LJ command stuff like this before you add it.

sayasama.livejournal.com/25273.html?replyto=199097
sayasama.livejournal.com/25273.html?cutid=1

ahmerst May 6 2010, 01:22:57 UTC

This is perfect, and you are perfect. I can't even begin to elaborate on how fabulously you pin down engrossing dialogue and interactions.

Everything that came out of Poland's mouth was especially try to character, and also cracked me up.

I like how you played with different mediums, from straight-up story telling to the exchanging of emails. All of it flowing very smoothly, and I can't believe how great you are at spinning such tales. You should probably hand over some of that talent for safekeeping. I'm pretty good at keeping things safe. Hand it over.

And now I want to run down the street and get a job as a waitress.

sayasama May 6 2010, 10:06:52 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad the dialogue (Especially Poland's) came out well. I always feel like I write too much of it. orz

And here I worried that all the jumping around would make it choppy. As for the safekeeping of talent, I think I'll invest in a safe... xD

Just be sure wherever you go is frequented by hot Russians.

kang_jae_gyu May 6 2010, 01:39:51 UTC

I really like this so far. Continue soon~!

sayasama May 6 2010, 10:07:20 UTC

Thank you! More should be up next week!

rissa_ichigo May 6 2010, 01:58:13 UTC

Yussshh! Hand over some of that talent to me as well please! :3

I love this sooooo much! This story sucked me in the first paragraph! I wonder what Arthur wants from Al.....

Please update soon! I love yas!

sayasama May 6 2010, 10:08:14 UTC

Would you like that gift-wrapped?

What indeed. Arthur, you greedy man.

Thank you~!

not_elven May 6 2010, 01:59:56 UTC

This is going to be awesome! My little heart is already starting to twist a bit because I've got a fairly good idea of where this is going...Alfred is going to need a hug sometime soon
I'm going to have to back up the anonymous reviewer up their though, the font is tiny...I've got my screen set on 150% so that I can read and my eyes are normally pretty awesome

sayasama May 6 2010, 10:10:10 UTC

Alfred always needs hugs in this, poor baby. Why do I like to put him in terrible situations?

I'll try to fix it, the font is pretty small. *too used to squinting to realize these things are a problem*