Less than Innocent, More than Like, 36/?

[sayasama]

Title: Less Than Innocent, More than Like
Pairing: LaviYuu
Rated: PG for the moment...Just because Lavi's a bad boy >:]
Warnings: Well, it's yaoi...but you already knew that, surely. No spoilers, because this is all speculation about their past. Just don't take this like it's really their past, and you're good.
Disclaimer: Saya owns the play, but

Comments

[fantasia0829]

Ah, so that was what Yori did to Kanda. That jerk. But his character feels kinda odd, even now, with that explained. It's almost like there were 2 of him.

And wouldn't Lavi like to know what Kanda did to get his healing powers. XD

[sayasama]

Maybe he feels odd because even when he was hurting Yuu, he didn't really want to hurt him? As far as there seeming to be two Yoris, that could just be the contrast between the Yori who knows what he really wants and the Yori that didn't.

Hah, he'll flip when he finds out, surely.

Thank you for the lovely comment~

[kazura_uyurin]

I don't really see how that's a way to lash out at someone... Er but never mind. *still doesn't really like Yori*

Ah, major akuma attack eh? Looks like the next chapter's going to exciting! :D

[sayasama]

Well the way Saya sees it is that as a 12-year-old, having your best and only friend set you up for a beat-down is upsetting at the least. Maybe it doesn't seem like a good way to lash out because Yori didn't do it himself? That's just because he didn't really want to hurt Yuu, he wanted to hurt his father, you know? He couldn't do that though. I'll try ti explain it better in the story soon though.

Indeed! It's be more exciting if someone who can write fight scenes was writing this though.....

Thanks for you comment~!

[serene_artist]

Yuu-chan seems happy with Yori, and he was never like that with Lavi... -_-
But then again, it was probably cause his "self proclaimed best friend" did like to tease him, and then there's all that stuff with Junior...
I think you're describing Yuu's character very well, and I really like where the story is headed.
Feel bad about the betrayal though, and I can't wait when Lavi finds out it was his fault for kanda's healing ability...but it was so sweet when he discovered what it was doing to him. Looks like he's caring alot more then he wants too :)
Another awesome entry, "How does she do it ?!?!"
Yay for break! Should I anticipate another update before the holidays end :3 ?
BTW, Happy Holidays! ^o^ Oh~ I want to draw something so bad for christ mas as well...really wanna see your picture too <3

[sayasama]

^^; Those are all good points, but more than anything Kanda isn't usually happy around Lavi is because he came around after Kanda decided being close to other people was useless, and he's the kind of person who will only show his happy expression to people he's close with (or at least he seems that way...). Though yeah, the Junior thing and the molest are definitely big factors in that, too ^^;

Yay~! It's always a confidence-booster to hear that Saya is getting the characters right!

Well, betrayal isn't exactly supposed to make one feel war mand fuzzy, so that's pretty good. Lavi's going to have a fit when he finds out, really. Saya can hardly wait to write it <333

Thank you as always for the kind comment~~~! And Happy Holidays to you too~!

[ziyuu]

Hrm... the beginning of this chapter was a bit unsettling... but I suppose that's a good thing if that was the effect you were going for. Heh... I kinda hate Yori now...but I suppose if Kanda can forgive him... then I can too. I suppose with the way it was written, there was no intention of pity for Yoru on the parts of the readers. That does make sense, considering there was no pity on Kanda's part either.

Lol, sorry. Trying to sort out my thoughts. Didn't mean for the post to be so long.

I was wondering if Yori's background would be explained more, or has that happened already? I remember reading little bits of his background in previous chapters... but will there be any more? Like about his father or anything? As I seem to recall, he wasn't a very good one. Hrm... perhaps a further explanation wouldn't be necessary.

[ziyuu]

Oh, erm... I liked the chapter also! Lol

[sayasama]

Indeed that is a good thing, Saya's glad to know that the feeling wasn't lost. Yori is the kind of character that no one can really love or hate completely. He should've been harder to forgive but in the end Kanda was really just sort of waiting for that apology.

No need to apologize! Saya lives off of long comments, honestly she does <333

Well, Saya originally didn't have any intention of making Yori's background very detailed, but she does have it very well planned out in her mind, so if further explanation is wanted, then it shall be given~!

Thank you for the comment~!

[reicheruchan]

great update!!!! hmm... i still don't like the idea of yori being so close to yuu!!! yori shoo shoo! hahahahaha!