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sayasama

Less than Innocent, More than Like 31/?

Jul 17, 2008 14:28

Title: Less Than Innocent, More than Like
Pairing: LaviYuu
Rated: PG for the moment...Just because Lavi's a bad boy >:]
Warnings: Well, it's yaoi...but you already knew that, surely. No spoilers, because this is all speculation about their past. Just don't take this like it's really their past, and you're good.
Disclaimer: Saya owns the play, but ( Read more... )

less than innocent more than like, lavi, kanda yuu, laviyuu, d.gray-man, rabi

Comments 9

clueless_quark July 17 2008, 21:03:17 UTC

You made my day... now it's all like, SHINY... and, and PURTY! And, oh wow, what is that- XD

Thank you so, so much for taking the time to continue the story. Your Lavi/Kanda interactions are one of my favorites, and I always enjoy the way you write about the boys. This chapter was simply preciousssssssss... oh Lavi, there is nothing more you can learn about getting yourself in trouble. BTW, Lavi's musings on how to pacify Kanda were priceless.

Lavi could just play dumb and act as though he’d misunderstood Kanda, or he could just say "Sorry, that’s classified," which would be equivalent to saying "Why yes, I am living a lie, but I can’t tell you that directly."

XD That would have sucked indeed.

Please continue to write moarz, moarz~! :)

sayasama July 21 2008, 21:30:27 UTC

thank you <3 Saya's glad you liked the chapter so much!

At this point, Lavi could inhale and piss Kanda off. It's very adorable how much they love-hate each other. Glad you liked Lavi's musings, he thinks a lot more than his facial expressions let on.

there shall be moar soon~!

reicheruchan July 18 2008, 07:32:29 UTC

new update!!!! yay!!!! i love it! yuu is so cute and pretty smart!

fantasia0829 July 18 2008, 11:21:35 UTC

An update! :DDD

Hmmm... It seems like Kanda feels betrayed by Lavi on some level. He's probably already gotten somewhat used to Lavi's incessant pestering that he takes it for granted that it'd always be like that between them, but realizing Lavi's been faking everything kinda makes it difficult to swallow.

Anyway, I noticed a typo here:

"I doesn’t matter," Kanda said with a bit of a huff. I think you were going for 'It'. :D

sayasama July 22 2008, 15:43:57 UTC

Yes, he wouldn't say it out loud, but he definitely took that badly. He'd have rathered that Lavi had just acted like his real self from the beginning, instead of stringing him along.
thanks for commenting~!

anazergal July 18 2008, 12:41:25 UTC

FINALLY AN UPDATE! <333

PS. "pre tell" should be "pray tell".

kazura_uyurin July 18 2008, 14:39:11 UTC

Yay an update!

I think you captured the tension between Kanda and Lavi during the "confession" scene pretty well. It must have seriously made Lavi exhaust all his options and work on his acting skills. randomly, I think Bookman might be pleased that Lavi deflected Kanda's question... of course, Bookman would still give Lavi a huge reprimand and probably several knocks to the head before considering that. ^^"

Kanda feels betrayed, somewhat. Although he'll probably not admit it. Ah, there has to be some reason why Kanda doesn't like being referred to as "my Yuu"! *wants to know* The dynamics between Kanda and Lavi are going to change! Looking forward to see how you continue this! ^.^

sayasama July 22 2008, 15:48:01 UTC

Thank you! Saya did her best to illustraite the difficulty of Lavi's situation here. and Bookman would be very proud, in a violent and displeased way

And yes, Kanda feels like he's just been slapped, and the overly-familiar way Lavi is calling him is not helping matters. There is a reason for his dislike of the phrase, which will be covered soon enough~!