The End Of Bastard Cho Kyuhyun

Jun 07, 2010 01:08



Title: The End Of Bastard Cho Kyuhyun
Pairing: Kyuwook (Kyuhyun Centric), minor!Kyumin, minor!Yewook
Rating: PG 15 (Some mentions of sex)
Genre: Fluff, angst, not sure...

Inspired by sthlikeit  and her supernova fanfic with the prompt drabble oneshot. It's awesome and a hundred time's better than this. This is crap because I can't write angst. Ugh. So please go ( Read more... )

super junior, kyuwook, kyuhyun, fanfic

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saya19 June 7 2010, 05:10:55 UTC
Spot for Hennu bb.
Hope you like it.
I'm tired.
Sorry for the lack of angst.
Sorry for changing some of the words.

Ugh.

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hennu15 June 7 2010, 06:44:12 UTC
No, no, no I didn't like it(them?)I LOVED yesssss,
This was angsty enough, my words were tooooo angsty anyways, so it's ok. But seriously I had this feeling that I wanted to smack Kyu for hurting Wook and I liked Yesung in this.

And I'm honored for the spot xD
Th end was happy? Right? Or something similar, I'm actually glad, angsty ending would've made me sad...:DDDD
You know the wrist part? OMG Wook is thin ENOUGH already and then I imagine him even thinner, that was scary.... and geometry...actually made me laugh and tie too. Rape and Ink were reallly angsty...

But I enjoyed reading this, this wasn't crap, this was really beautifully written, you should do this again, with more fluffy words maybe :DDDD

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saya19 June 7 2010, 11:29:54 UTC
Haha. Okay. hey. I'll reply more (maybe) when I get because my bus is in like 5 mins. Yeah. Thanks for reading and liking. lol. Well, it had to get angsty so Ryeowook did get very thin. LOL. Rape is kind of like an angsty word so I don't blame myself. Ink was quite like bad too, I made it that way. I was getting to fluffy in the beginning so yeah. LOL. I did like geometry when I first saw that I was like WTF. How am I going to do that? But when I started writing it just came to me so it wasn't bad at all.

Haha. I might do this again. With a Ryeowook version. Should I?
Yeah. Ending is happyish in a like sad situation.

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hennu15 June 7 2010, 18:19:23 UTC
YOU SHOULD, TOTALLY!!! DO IT xD
lol, well geometry is veeeeeeery angsty for me=_= and it wasn't bad at all indeed, it was OSM xDDDDD

Did I express myself enough? I was half-asleep while reading it, and I hope that I won't sound creepy, but I over read it xD
Yeahh..me loves, me wants second part(or Wookpov????) WHY????

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saya19 June 7 2010, 05:11:46 UTC
Spot for xrosepetalsx because I love her!
And she helped me with this.
Thank you bb.
If you read this, hope you enjoy the crap. XD

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xrosepetalsx June 18 2010, 22:11:09 UTC
LOL good thing I saw my name or I would have made a comment at the bottom somewhere xDD I really loved this, idek. I love how you made their relationship, and it's SOO Kyuwook. Idek, one of the best Kyuwook's I've ever read. Now I'm mad it took me forever to read this D< D< Bad xrosepetaslx! xDD <333 I love you Aimee <333

Have you ever read a Kyuwook were Kyuhyun rapes Ryeowook? I think that's what it was...I'm hoping it was a kyuwook. Ima find the fic, and show you, cause this reminded me of that.

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xrosepetalsx June 18 2010, 22:12:05 UTC
I didn't describe the fic I'm thinking of very well LOL

I'll just go find it xDD

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saya19 June 18 2010, 23:44:27 UTC
LOL. Awwwww. Haha I don't mind either way though my little spot here would've been lonely without a partner. :DDD
Ahah. Wow. Thank you. That's a big compliment. :DDDD
Haha. No it's okay. Don't worry. I love you whether you read it or not <333333333

Yeah...ugh...we've talked about it already...

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saya19 June 7 2010, 05:15:10 UTC
kk.
Spot for kyulyn if you decides to read this.
Ummmm as for what I owe you. There it is.
Hope it's not too small.
YS. WTF. I know. I don't see the 4 jib hairness.
How close was your guess?

Anyways, hope you enjoy the turd I wrote.
Ugh. I'm tired. rushed and need sleep.
Thank you.

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kyulyn June 7 2010, 06:19:51 UTC
LOL, it might be for the way you look at the cam, you know, it does have some YS feeling in it :)) But I don't think you look like him, not at all :P Can't really tell how close was my guess cauz' I only guess that you have short hair and you said it was true already LOL *pix is small though ;)*
And don't underrate yourself, this is really good. I love how bastard Kyu falls for Ryeo Wook the angel. And I love how Ryeo Wook loves Kyu with all the flaws he has. Their love isn't perfect in a normal way, but to me it's still perfect XD.

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saya19 June 7 2010, 11:33:44 UTC
Yeah. LOL. does it? Well, yeah I don't look like him so when ppl say that I do. I go really? No. Yeah. LOL. true but whatever you had guessed was right and that was short hair and something else. Well baby face...kind of maybe not so much in that one. LOL. Yeah, maybe I'll show you another one bigger next time. But for now, good luck with your exams!

LOL. Sorry. It's my first thought. To freak out at my post and bash at myself. Yeah. Kyuhyun is a bastard and Ryeowook is an angel. Flaws that Kyuhyun has made, it was just I had to make it angsty and like the first 6 or 7 weren't helping me. LOL. Yeah, it's not perfect but it is. I love that. It's perfect because it's not.

Thanks for reading dear! yay!

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saya19 June 7 2010, 11:34:28 UTC
LOL. Sorry, love the ... haha.

Thanks for reading!

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coregurlz June 7 2010, 07:02:26 UTC
Unnie,the story is lovely....
I love it although I try to read fifth time to understand it and what unnie know,the story is perfect if I the one who read it...hehehehe ^_^
That bastard Kyuhyun love the sweety Wookie...
LOVELY...Waiting for another story....^_^
When unnie can update the....I forgot the title but the story about a game that Kyu,Henry,kangin and donghae play to get the top point...I will waiting for it...^_^
Thanks for sharing and love unnie...

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saya19 June 7 2010, 11:36:11 UTC
Five times? Wow.
That's so many. Haha. Yeah, I did make it kind of confusing. Ugh. Hehe.
Yes, bastard Kyuhyun loves the sweet Ryeowook.
Ah. I will try to soon. I've been very busy. I've got exams soon!!!!!!!! DDDDDDDDDD:
But I will try to update Kyuhyun's Little Game. Thanks for reading that one too.

<3333333333333

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