Cute and a bit bumpy on the way, but I liked it. But I have to admit, one thing got my attention. When Arthur fell down, Eames rolled him onto his back and that is one of the things you are not supposed to do under any circumstances, since:
a. it could actually do more harm than help, especially when there is a possibility of spine contusion.
b. side position is considered a safe position, so if one is conscious and breathing you just keep the person warm and wait for the professional help.
Sorry, for being anal about this, but it just irked me, other than that I loved this story and I'm especially fond of Cobb actually taking care of Eames when he was pining and them being fire-fighters <3
Aww, this is really adorable. I like how you build the relationship between Arthur and Eames, the bantering, the misunderstanding, and eventually their resovles. And I adore Artemis, she's a darling!
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a. it could actually do more harm than help, especially when there is a possibility of spine contusion.
b. side position is considered a safe position, so if one is conscious and breathing you just keep the person warm and wait for the professional help.
Sorry, for being anal about this, but it just irked me, other than that I loved this story and I'm especially fond of Cobb actually taking care of Eames when he was pining and them being fire-fighters <3
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I like how you build the relationship between Arthur and Eames, the bantering, the misunderstanding, and eventually their resovles. And I adore Artemis, she's a darling!
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