FIC: Future Imperfect (11/16) (Kirk/McCoy, dystopic AU)

[savoytruffle]

Title: Future Imperfect (11/16)
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy
Rating: Mature (this part)
Word count: 3,239
Warnings: Extensive but non-explicit discussion of past child sexual and emotional abuse; slavery "light"
Thanks: To cordelianne, who is a faithful partner in a stressful time.
Notes: This story takes place in the same time period as the 2009 movie (and will

Comments

[treksnoopy]

So much pain!
This continues to be a wonderful story!

[severinne]

Oh, my... *whimpers*

I still love this story, so very much, but oh, my heart... *whimpers more*

[sickbay23]

Poor Jim, he has to suffer a lot as a young Boy, thank god he has Bones now and he trust him, because Bones is a good man :)
Great Story

[mijan]

*woobles*

Oh, Jim. Oh, Bones.

[vulcan_rhapsody]

Oh...damn. These last parts were like a punch in the gut. I'm happy, though, that Jim confided in Leonard (and that both decided that they wanted to protect the other as much as they could).

Jim's back story is horrific. You managed to portray him well (and didn't overdo it, which isn't easy).

Also, I'm glad to finally know what Jim's up to in his free time - just as I'm glad to know that Pike is a good guy in this story and has been helping Jim all along (I suspected it! But I wouldn't have bet on it).

Can I add you as a friend?