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[shiina_nozumo]

Title: Not Enough
Written for: Kira and Cagalli's Birthday Celebration.
Dedicated to: angrycherokee who's submission inspired me and eventually lead to me kicking down my muse's door and dragging it out so that I could write this. XD Also for cloudedge who's comment reminded me that, yeah, I still had to write something. XD
Pairings: ShinnStellar, MeryinAthrun,

Comments

[cloudedge]

oh, ironies upon ironies... deliciously written i love and hate how the cards are dealt sometimes... it's tragically beautiful ; ;!
and with all these pent up emotions, it's only a matter of time that they break, don't you think?

and... my comment? which comments? :x I dropped a comment on your drabbles yesterday... are you talking about that one @_@?

[shiina_nozumo]

Yup, that's the one. ^-^ Thanks!

Glad that you liked it. Destiny can really get in the way of things can't it?

[angrycherokee]

(true pain was being so close yet not allowed to touch)

It's so true, and it speaks volumes.
I loved this. Good in the paragraph mixes with the bad in parentheses. Unfortunately (or fortunately for angst-lovers like myself xD), the bad outweighs the good.
It's ended wonderfully: everyone is happy but them. Everyone thinks they're happy. They're not.

[whitelilies22]

I haven't read your work for awhile. This was pretty good ^^ The writing style was original and just so...cool ^^
Good job, shiina!