Naruto, Gaara/Sakura

[whitelilies22]

Title: Without Words
Fandom: Naruto
Pairing: Gaara/Sakura
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or any of its characters. Profit is not being made from the following piece of fiction.
Notes: Written for 52_flavours

Comments

[korinacaffeine]

I really like this. :) A couple things I spotted, though:

"Sand Hokage" would either be Sand KAGE or just Kazekage. :)

And "orbs" describing eyes... Meh, maybe it's just me, but that's a pet peeve I have for fanfiction! ^^;

[whitelilies22]

Thanks for the correction :) I've been out of Naruto for awhile >.< For the orbs thing...I've been using that forever so its hard to not use it anymore ^^;

Thanks for reading :D

[randomsome1]

Heh, same here with the orbs thing. It screams "Urple alert--run now!" to me.

[everyheart]

It wouldn't be 'Sand Hokage', 'Hokage' is Fire Shadow and only the Konoha Kage has the title. XD; Gaara is Kazekage or Wind Shadow.

Just wanted to say that, though. =3 Other than that tidbit that the Narutard in my insisted on pointing out, it was sweet. >o< (ohgawd. Gaara and Sweet. Maybe I should revise. XDDD All the same, I LIKED IT)

[whitelilies22]

Fixed ^_^ Thank you for pointing it out and for reading :D

[statikv]

Aw, very cute!
=]

[whitelilies22]

Thank you :)

[fringe_x1]

soooooo cuuutee. i'm really starting to like this pairing =]

just one thing: i think instead of "starring" you meant "staring"

[whitelilies22]

Hehe, thanks for reading and I'm glad to convert :D
As for the starring thing, that's how I've been taught to spell it but that way probably makes more sense...thanks for pointing it out.

[ukasaag]

your story made me say awwwww <-- jebus christ >.>

[whitelilies22]

Glad to draw something out of you :)
Thanks for reading!