Comments | save_vs_magic: Harder, Better, Faster, Stronger (NC-17) 4/4

save_vs_magic

Harder, Better, Faster, Stronger (NC-17) 4/4

Oct 20, 2010 23:45

wizards of waverly place, smut, fic, jalex

Comments 9

whyteroze28 October 21 2010, 07:42:28 UTC

I think I've died and gone to WOWP heaven. I mean seriously, this is how the series should end... unless they actually think of a way for the three of them to all keep their powers.
And I love the way that Max isn't as clueless as he seems. Of course I've always suspected that he was just hiding his intelligence (as he grew into it), and Conscience being separate was just a way to actually explain it.
And my favorite use of a line from the show (at least from an episode I've seen)?
And cue the applaaaaauuuse!
And favorite line that should have been in an episode?
Justin blinks at her. “What? No! Batman does not take his girlfriend with him when he goes out on patrol!”
“Oh, really?” Alex snorts. “Tell that to Robin.”
In fact that whole conversation was awesome (especially the nod to 'Hawkgirl'). And Alex as Catwoman, which she so fits.
Just, love it! <3

makel0venotwar7 October 21 2010, 12:58:37 UTC

Eeek! Absolutely fantastic! The plot: amazing. The smut: *lays twitching and panting* whew...

“What, I’m not allowed a preview of coming attractions?” was definitely my favorite line. Hilarious, HOT, and so very Alex.
The characterization was wonderful. I loved it.

dianelyn October 22 2010, 12:44:37 UTC

Awesome.:D

lezbianseagull2 October 22 2010, 23:43:41 UTC

I LOVE this story!! All the pop culture references made my day! I'm still chuckling over boo boo kitty fuck. :)

Great story!!!!

sullyvann October 23 2010, 04:26:16 UTC

i am in love with this story. i want you to write a million, trillion, zillion more fan fic stories!!!

no, seriously, this was amazing, awesome, fantastic and i can't wait to read what you come up with next!