Comments | saucydiva: Fic: Disarming

saucydiva

Fic: Disarming

Oct 29, 2013 23:38

Title: Disarming

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fic: one shot, brooklyn nine nine, fan fic

Comments 13

courtknees1 October 30 2013, 05:50:27 UTC

You know I love this. And the changes you've made just make it even more awesome. Wooooo all the B99 fic!

saucydiva November 7 2013, 20:38:49 UTC

No, YOU'RE awesome.

missnumbat October 30 2013, 06:59:07 UTC

This is great! I think you captured the characters perfectly. I didn't really ship Jake and Amy before I read this, but now I do!

saucydiva November 7 2013, 20:42:03 UTC

I think the show has given us enough information that I can ship them. For instance, they're both hot, and they've got that fun, hate-y/flirt-y vibe going. And that's really all I need. This last ep (1x07) left me entirely pleased with my decision to ship them.

missnumbat November 7 2013, 21:33:27 UTC

Oh yes. It was clear from the outset that they were going to be the main ship of the show. I just wasn't particularly into it. But after that last episode I am into it.

emilyla October 30 2013, 16:47:06 UTC

SO GOOD. Perfect characterization. I love it. I kind of ship them more now that I did twenty minutes ago. Good job.

saucydiva November 7 2013, 20:50:33 UTC

I just really enjoy their vibe together. Antagonist/friends is one of my favorite type of hookups, so I really can't wait till the show goes there

craponaspatula October 30 2013, 19:45:02 UTC

I enjoy you.

saucydiva November 7 2013, 20:42:44 UTC

I want to make out with you on a pile of caution tape.

stillscape October 31 2013, 20:59:47 UTC

This is awesome; you are awesome. Especially the descriptions of Charles' terrible apartment, because yes.

saucydiva November 7 2013, 20:56:45 UTC

I would LOVE to see his apartment. I imagine there's figurines, and that he always has a ton of food and that he just wants to be the hang-out place.

Also, with his "You just got schooled, bitches! Sorry I said bitches" he may have become my new favorite character.