The Trouble with Physical Proximity (2/3)

[saucydiva]

Title: The Trouble with Physical Proximity (2/3)
Author: saucydiva
Word count: 5.5K (this part)
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: clearly I don’t own it or I would be paying models $100k to paint their nails
Timeline: Post- 4x01, AU after that
Summary: Clubbing, awkward sort-of dates, and the continuation of Pawnee’s office supply fetish. Now with videotape!

Comments

[stillscape]

Aw, I love Ann in this. Trying to be less of a doormat, and getting annoyed at Jean-Ralphio (who is probably a worse intern than April was), and confused by Chris's terrible hair, and baffled as to how no one else is noticing that Leslie and Ben are not the slightest bit sneaky. And the wedding/Thanksgiving story is perfect.

When do we get the next part?

[sullen_aquarian]

OK, every story needs to include a Jean-Ralphio rap. Honestly, that should be mandatory.

Poor Ann--come on Leslie, thank her! Your best friend had to deal with J-R, that's worth a thousand thanks.

Love that Ben's family thinks he's dating Chris and that Chris talks to his mom all the time.

[greenshouse]

OMG OMG OMG! YAY YAY YAY!
I'm so glad that part 2 is here!!!

OK. THIS STORY. SO MUCH AWESOME!

Firstly, Ann watches The Office?!?! LOVE IT and don't get me started on that restaurant scene!

Jean-Ralphio and Tom generating the party tent AND the group jogging over lunch breaks!

AND the fact that Chris still talks to Ben's family, that they think he's dating Chris and OMG Disneyland!

Leslie treating Ann this way, and Ann being aware of this is great and sad at the same time. Glad Ann is no longer doing whatever Leslie tells her to do, but I don't like Leslie in this bad light.

BUT OMG RON CARRYING TOM! BEST!

[spunkyar]

Awww...I love Ben and Leslie sneaking around, but it's so cute to see Ann and Chris doing it too. :) Also the background story for Ben and Chris was too funny. Can't wait to see what happens next.

[rebeccavis]

This is PERFECTION. Especially the restaurant scene. I swear I enjoyed this more than this week's episode of Parks. Great job and keep it up!