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saturnangel587 February 1 2010, 19:05:57 UTC
Glad you liked it! :D I'm still a little surprised these ladies appeared again, but they clearly have more stories to tell. I'm as ready to listen as I can be while school's still in session.

I may pop up from time to time in a JFF (like this week's prompt looks very tempting, but it's better that I don't sign up officially until the summer. Even though I get schoolwork done, I know myself enough to know I can get a little tunnel vision-y with trying to accomplish the prompt for the week. It'll be hard not to sign up, but if the result is my BA in English (with an Art minor) in May, it's a worthy (temporary) sacrifice. Plus, devotion to the collection for independent study means a potentially publish-able (publishible? publishable?) manuscript come the end of the semester!

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mister_troper February 2 2010, 17:06:47 UTC
That was great. Wonderful mix of the subtle and the unsubtle interaction.

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ct_hol February 15 2010, 07:19:55 UTC
Very emotiional piece and character is really strong
I really liked this piece, especially the twists and turns in the story when you least expect it, keep it up!

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