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saturnangel587

brigits_flame = Cue

Dec 05, 2009 20:12

( Nothing ruins a perfectly good pool game like a hot blonde. )

under the van gogh, brigits_flame, storytime, writing

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saturnangel587 December 6 2009, 04:08:05 UTC

And in this one, he's actually the voice of reason!

The drunk voice of reason, but the voice of reason all the same!

rephen December 6 2009, 21:16:08 UTC

What an interesting duo, these two. I like the dialog very much. It really reads like they were both intoxicated, and the ending leaves me wanting to find out if indeed Matt will get a black eye or not.

saturnangel587 December 6 2009, 21:24:34 UTC

Thanks! I definitely plan to continue this through to a more definite conclusion, so I'll be sure to let you know when I do. :D

mistvieh December 6 2009, 21:19:23 UTC

BAHAHAHA! I love how well you captured drunken-ness, and the fact that you never abandoned the tie-in with Cue. You kept coming back, kept interrupting their dialogue to make them drink. Very, very fun. I would have liked to see if he scored, though. XD

saturnangel587 December 6 2009, 21:27:43 UTC

Thanks much! :D I'll be sure to let you know when I finish this one, since this is just where I left off because I ran out of time.

I had quite a bit of fun writing this. And a good amount of experience from watching my drunk friends and family members, I guess. XD

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saturnangel587 December 7 2009, 02:02:25 UTC

Thanks! And I totally love your icon. :D

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saturnangel587 December 10 2009, 05:25:19 UTC

Thanks. :D