Fall of Reason - Chapter 5/?

Oct 20, 2013 19:15

Author: satine_1984
Title: Fall of Reason
Genre: Angst/Romance
Rating: G - NC-17 (It depends on the chapter)
Word Count: ?


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!author|artist: satine_1984, fan fiction, atwt, genre: angst/romance, reid, pairing: luke/reid, luke, rating: pg-13

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amyafa October 20 2013, 17:52:01 UTC
Another great chapter.

I loved the spider and fly bit.
They have got a long road ahead.

But with a taste of each other, they will be looking at each other trough different eyes.

I loved the Reid/Katie banter.

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satine_1984 October 23 2013, 16:19:22 UTC
Haha. I'm glad you liked that part. Wasn't too sure about it at first. And you are right: There's still a lot they have to figure out but I think they're already starting to see each other through different eyes. Veeeery slowly.
Thank you again so much for reading and commenting! :)

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sleeper6 October 21 2013, 14:27:04 UTC
Katie and Reid are so cool together--and funny!

Hmm, so Reid has been gettin' some. Wonder if now he'll only want Luke???

Luke is so confused! Poor guy. :(

Another great update!

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satine_1984 October 23 2013, 16:25:18 UTC
Thank you sleeper! Yes. Luke is an emotional wreck right now but time will heal and Reid will also do his part.
But yeah...Reid's been getting some. He's not the relationship kind of guy. If he only wants Luke now, after what happened between them...well...you will see. ;-)

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luregroupie October 22 2013, 04:15:43 UTC
I amloving this story! You really captured their characters' voicess, it feel so real. Please update soon:-)

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satine_1984 October 23 2013, 16:30:15 UTC
Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I'm so happy you like my story. Unfortunately because of my studies, writing the next chapter is going to take a bit of time but I will update as soon as I can! :)

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kccalgal October 24 2013, 01:15:28 UTC
Wow the post encounter moods of both men couldn't be further apart and both I think are very accurate. Luke did was hurting, did something impulsive and is full of regret and self condemnation. Meanwhile Reid is happy, relaxed and hungry eating all of Katie's dinner. Thoroughly enjoyed Reid and Katie's interaction. Looking forward to the next day (or chapter) to see where they go from here.

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satine_1984 January 31 2014, 15:53:05 UTC
First of all, I'm really sorry that it took me so long to reply to your sweet comment. For some reason I thought I had already replied to everyone. I'm so happy that you keep reading and commenting my fic and this weekend I'm finally going to post my next chapter. Took me long enough. ;-)
Anyway, I'm very glad you liked this chapter and thank you so much for your patience.

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parishs October 24 2013, 08:00:11 UTC
aahh, great story, read all 5 chapters at once. You really write sex well, my god.Hope Reid is going to visit Luke soon again, I know he can't resist him when he see him again...

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satine_1984 January 31 2014, 15:59:07 UTC
So sorry, parishs. For some reason I didn't get to reply to all comments for this chapter. I'm happy that you're reading my fic and thank you so much for your comment. I'm glad you liked the smut chapter and don't worry...it won't be the last. ;) Unfortunately I couldn't post for such a long time but I've just got the latest chapter back from my betas and I'm going to post it this weekend!!

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