Ficcy fic

[satine86]

I've been sitting on this fic a while now, it was going to be my second submission for Ficathon because I kinda wanted to troll, but then I didn't know where to end it and it needed work so Sandy and Rae were kind enough to offer their help and this is what it turned into. Then I told Sandy in SD that I would post it up so yay....... ?

Title: Foul

Comments

[mrcrybrilliance]

YAY!!!!

I'm going to squeal over this as if I haven't before...

I love that she recognizes them kinda, and the teasing which I'm guessing is not normal for Ami with patients.

I love the set up with Stephen (and knowing who he is, lol).

Even the SilMil part, where, at the end of that, your heart just shatters and you wanna hug and cuddle them.

And the end, omg, the end, and you just know that Ami freezes and stares at her before going to find the Mamoru, and she's not sure how to feel about it, and she'll probably be leaving for her next show or whatever anyway and and goes into overthink mode...

anyway, um, YAY :)

[satine86]

She might leave back to England, she might stay, hard to say. However if she does leave she will return in a short amount of time. :P

[cbrandtwright]

How hath no one ever used the endearment 'Sprite' before? It is really too perfect.

Sooooooooooooo many points for writing in first person - I really think our fandom needs to do it more.

[satine86]

I'm pretty sure I've ganked that from somewhere. V maybe? :O

First person scares the hell out of me, yet I'm always drawn to it. WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME!? ;_;