Comments | sati_lotus: Fight on Undaunted: Chapter Twelve

sati_lotus

Fight on Undaunted: Chapter Twelve - part 2

Aug 26, 2011 23:00

pam, flashback, eric, violence, part 2, godric, werewolves

Comments 8

jelly_baby23 August 26 2011, 17:02:24 UTC

Love the little intimate moments between Eric and Godric in the flashbacks.

Ewww!!!! at the severed hand and skin, tho! Much more inventive than the typical severed finger of a hostage. :)

Things are definitely getting more and more interesting...

sati_lotus August 27 2011, 02:32:12 UTC

So glad you're still enjoying the fic!

I always forget that some people are squeemish... I'm not always nice to my characters...

jelly_baby23 August 27 2011, 13:53:33 UTC

Oh, I'm not squimish, I just think it must have been horrible for Godric!

sati_lotus August 27 2011, 14:24:11 UTC

LOL! I think it would be horrible for anyone!

711gambit August 26 2011, 23:00:53 UTC

This keeps getting better. I love the flashbacks, and the way Eric has both grown and stayed very much himself. Godric is enigmatic and intriguing. I look forward to seeing the two of them reunited.

sati_lotus August 27 2011, 02:37:11 UTC

Well, the majority of the flashbacks weren't in my earlier drafts, so I've had to go back and put them in. It's a bit tricky figuring out where to put them because I had most of the 'modern day' chapters already written.

As I said, that was a snap decision, but I like them.

I'm glad the characters are working out for people. Flashback Eric is surprisingly easy to write, but Godric isn't.

Yes, yes, yes, yes, YES! arye_sarin August 29 2011, 07:52:54 UTC

Gee, thanks! I never knew my short sentence could do this. I am honored. : )

The fic is pure gold. I love flashbacks (naturally!) and Eric and Godric are so well portrayed. As always.

This is really good! Keep writing!

Re: Yes, yes, yes, yes, YES! sati_lotus August 29 2011, 10:07:46 UTC

LOL, yeah - as much as I'm enjoying writing the flashbacks, I have all the present day chapters already done! Now I have to write the flashbacks to put them in... which has sorta doubled the length of the fic! But now there's more slash too ^_^

*whisper* Which is next chapter.