Fight on Undaunted - Chapter Seventeen

Oct 28, 2011 00:28

Summary: With the threat of Sophie-Anne and the Authority still hovering, Eric hadn't worried about Russell's warning.   When Godric is mysteriously resurrected, he realises that maybe he should have.  Set post S3.

Pairing: Godric/ Eric.

Rating: NC-17.  This is a very EXPLICIT chapter.

Warnings: Angst, slash, bloodplay, violence, torture.  If you're ( Read more... )

nc-17, slash, eric/godric, eric, godric, sex

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nursedarry October 27 2011, 21:14:19 UTC
Okay, I read this just before leaving work - yes - shhh - and I fucking CRIED ALL THE WAY HOME!!! The way you write these two - especially Godric - is just perfect! I do not have enough words for how much I love your characterisations. They are so tender, but hard, and although they now inhabit the modern age, they've lost none of their ancient personas, merely adapted them to fit into their current lives. I love how their old selves shine through the new. I love how they (mostly, but not always) second-guess the other, whilst still keeping the relationship...comfortably fresh - does that make sense?

And the kissing! UNF!

I love Eric with his long hair (pic on Ch16) and IS THERE MORE FIC, ja???

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sati_lotus October 27 2011, 21:54:09 UTC
There is quite a bit of kissing, isn't there? I was worried there was too much.

This chapter was written WAY before most of the flashbacks,so it is really great to hear they work together.

Long hair is very hot.

Thank you so much for commenting. Gives me big smiles.

And there is HEAPS more fic.

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jelly_baby23 November 29 2011, 20:33:28 UTC
Good to see Godric better, though a little melancholy. :(

Eric tensed. He’d seen this anguished expression on his Maker’s face three times before.

You've got me curious - will we get to "see" those other times? ;)

Sorry for the late comment, but I forgot. :-) Still loving this. :-)

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sati_lotus November 30 2011, 08:32:50 UTC
Lol - no need to apologise for 'late' comments, I'm always happy to know that someone is reading. Besides, I'm taking my time between chapters - fighting writer's block on the next chapter. Very annoying.

As for seeing the 'other' times.... maybe.... ^_^

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