Comments | sasunaru100: how the shit do I tag this thing again?

itthinghardon in sasunaru100

how the shit do I tag this thing again?

Jun 08, 2006 12:39

Title: Gone
Author: Nihilism (leecherous/itthinghardon)
Summary, Notes: No real plot. Spoilers for manga chapter 309, maybe? An almost-poem that will undoubtedly become a poem after it's done here. Did you all know that insomnia works wonders for writing?
Rating: PG at worst.
Category: Drabble - 136 words. Loneliness challenge.
Disclaimer: I own nothing. This is, ( Read more... )

narusasu, loneliness, drabble

Comments 9

hitzusin June 8 2006, 21:47:07 UTC

That was wonderful. <3

itthinghardon June 8 2006, 21:56:59 UTC

Thank you. <3

itthinghardon June 8 2006, 21:57:30 UTC

Guh, LJ. There was a ♥ at the end of that.

shadedfaith June 9 2006, 00:38:25 UTC

I think I love your insomnia <3.

It's really lovely, especially how you focused on that one word and gave it so much pain.

itthinghardon June 9 2006, 01:27:08 UTC

I would too if it didn't leave this awful taste in my mouth. But, thank you very, very much, because I did try.

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itthinghardon June 9 2006, 01:33:40 UTC

Thank you for enjoying it and letting me know you did. That line ended up being one of the only ones that stuck verbatim in the poetry version; it's probably my favorite as well.

yura_slash June 10 2006, 14:27:33 UTC

amazing. very well done prose- elegant and haunting.

itthinghardon June 12 2006, 12:05:05 UTC

Oooh, prose. That's a flattering word I'm sure has never been applied to my fanfic endeavours before. Thank you!

yura_slash June 14 2006, 05:19:13 UTC

you're welcome ^^ it was really very good.

ps- *icon love, like whoa*