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(Fic) Guilty and Alone

Jun 06, 2006 21:24

Title: “Guilty and Alone”
Series: Naruto
Author: Snow Tigra
Pairings: SasuNaruSasu
Warnings: Any warnings I give will give it away. Masterbation.
Summary: Sasuke and Naruto were meant to be together. They just were.
Written for the lonliness challenge on sasunaru100

Challenge #5

( A hand across the shirt, sliding across buttons... )

sasunaru, loneliness, fic

Comments 9

civetta_x June 7 2006, 02:30:36 UTC

Wow, amazing job. I'm actually glad you focused on Sakura's lonliness - you've done something different from everyone else, and that in itself is an accomplishment. Very original.

Nice job. ;D

hitzusin June 7 2006, 03:49:27 UTC

Technically I shouldn't accept this into the challenge, since the focused character is Sakura and not either of the boys. But alas, it does have SasuNaru in it. So I will accept. <3 ^_^

yura_slash June 11 2006, 05:18:52 UTC

i was wondering, could you possibly delete alerted's comment 4 down from this one? i find it rude, crude, and completely uncalled for. maybe it's just me, but it seems downright mean

ryo0oki June 7 2006, 03:54:05 UTC

wonderful ;O

unique, sad, and hot.

lots of love for you x3

noodleslove June 7 2006, 05:15:59 UTC

Gasp! The ending really surprised me so I went back and reread it.
That was really wonderful! And original too! :333

maplepie_tree June 7 2006, 05:28:59 UTC

oh wow i got totally sucked into it at the beginning..and then ending was like an overload! @[]@

i suppose i can see sakura trying to fill in the gap of having neither of her teammates to comfort HER when she's blue (or feeling needy). definitely makes for a great story =3