Comments | sashash: sure, yes, it needs work

sashash

sure, yes, it needs work

Aug 17, 2005 17:31

but at least looks better than it did back in february ( Read more... )

poem

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See, now multimediagrl August 17 2005, 18:11:04 UTC

THIS shit should have been at Erotica! YES!

Re: See, now valis429 August 17 2005, 22:30:43 UTC

My thoughts exactly.

Don't you dare ever read this to my (girl? fling? continuing obsession?), Adam. Shane Koyczan almost stole her away as is. Wowza.

Re: See, now sashash August 17 2005, 23:55:24 UTC

aww (blushes) thanks. there's no danger; i haven't seen her at any local slams, and i doubt i will. though if you want us to get to know each other better, you can have her come down and check out some local slam action.

Re: See, now valis429 August 18 2005, 11:45:56 UTC

And she will, undoubtedly. It was cool to see someone go down the EXACT SAME ROAD as I did with regards to appreciating performance poetry. (She's an ex-theatre rat, retired as of a few years ago, but Nationals lit her fire right back up.) (Ahem.)

Come to think of it, could you send a list of good mikes in the area that I could forward over to her?

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nerak_g August 17 2005, 21:03:50 UTC

that avocado i had for dinner sure was yummy~ the depression where the pit comes out...just invites a tongue.
only qualm~the word probing~right there with lapping shores of apexes.
otherwise, very hot.

sashash August 17 2005, 23:56:09 UTC

i'm hardly married to that word. i just needed some kind of qualifier there. thanks for pointing it out.

tupelo_lights August 17 2005, 23:07:05 UTC

I wanna eat you like beating up pants all over Spain.

But more on your poem later.

sashash August 17 2005, 23:56:33 UTC

oh baby. talk dirtier!

thesaucemonster August 18 2005, 06:31:16 UTC

oh shit.

damn, where's that swag bag vibrator?

sashash August 18 2005, 08:37:02 UTC

best compliment i've ever received on lj.

DESERVED. multimediagrl August 18 2005, 10:41:53 UTC

PS. Thanks for the moment to brown-eyed girls. We don't get much. And if I could have had it on the second night, I would have. YOU guys did that. :) And I didn't read at all, either, Drag.

But I'd give up reading x3 just to hear this. I printed it out. It's going up on the wall in my house.

Re: DESERVED. sashash August 18 2005, 14:42:01 UTC

*really big blush*

thanks, g.

shirash August 19 2005, 05:14:38 UTC

now there's a REAL slam poem. favorite:

I could make a little loveseat of you.
I will rip the summer out of the sky
and paint it on your inner lips like
a boiling distortion.
Tonight I’m a snowman burning
in your doorway.
Tonight I’m the engine kissing
into the pavement because
someone in the cab said the road knew your name.

the rest I could do without, but I bet hearing it outloud is amazing. I'm not one for 'pussy'.... but that's just personal.

sashash August 19 2005, 09:56:15 UTC

i like your selectiveness. i used to be afraid of 'pussy', but i was turned around by a lot of feminists and lovers of word sounds. i think it teeters on the line between sexy and too much. to use it right...

shirash August 19 2005, 23:14:14 UTC

my vag is not a cat.
it may act like a cat.
but is not.

no idea how cunt evolved. but I prefer not calling names and just action. active v passive. that sort of thing.

sashash August 20 2005, 11:22:00 UTC

a spring is not Spring. i'm just sayin. i don't know the etymology, but i do so like its smoothness, and the percussive start. i also quite like the word vagina, but in different context. sometimes calling names is an action. i'd even say it is often.