[fic] "Untitled" Chapter 1 -- original story

[sasha_janre]

Hey! Remember these profiles? Here's chapter 1 of that story! It's short and I'm not sure how good it is, but I said I'd post it. How are those sketches coming, Amy? XDD

Comments

[dazedpuckbunny]

--was hard to breathe. His lungs screamed for rest and his thin body ached and seared with pain as he forced himself to continue running-- That made my chest hurt! Nice imagery!

*already discussed t3h funny in chat*

I can't wait to read more! I love YA type adventures and especially ones with mysterious displaced strangers, and strange amulets and groups of kids ready to fight the fight! Or whatever they're going to do. :)

[sasha_janre]

Aww, thank you! I'm really going to work hard at this. XD;

[firemasterskye]

I need to dig them out. Did you like the ones I showed you even? You didn't say much.

Way to finish the chapter tho! I'll beta it later :3 Good start tho

[sasha_janre]

As mentioned in chat, maybe when you've added some colour I can make a "final decision" but the sketches you did show me were pretty good!

And thanks! I'll try and keep "the streak going" XD;