Comments | sarisa_rahe: Fic: Minigolf (Tony/Pepper)

sarisa_rahe

Fic: Minigolf (Tony/Pepper)

Sep 10, 2010 20:59

Title: Minigolf

Prompt: Pepperony 200, #192. Minigolf

Rating: PG-13 (mild language)

Word Count: 750

Summary: Pre-movie. Tony (slowly) starts to realize what he’s missing.

Author's Note: A bit more light-hearted :) One-shot.

( This is ridiculous. It’s so ridiculous that it actually takes ridiculousness to an entirely new level, and not for the first time in the past twenty minutes, Pepper decides that someone needs to voice that opinion, since she seems to be the only sane one left in this group. )

tony/pepper, fanfiction, iron man, rating: pg-13

Comments 6

luckytohaveher September 11 2010, 02:23:09 UTC

Very cute! I love how Happy is completley silent the whole time. The UST probablybroke him :P

Good work!

sarisa_rahe September 11 2010, 03:01:17 UTC

Thanks! (Love your avvy, btw, was so disappointed when they cut that scene from the movie.) Unlike Tony, Happy is smart enough to keep his mouth shut at the right times.. Poor man had to watch the UST for so long... lol.

saichick September 11 2010, 04:48:01 UTC

You do the Tony/Pepper UST so well ... and their dialogue. Love it.

sarisa_rahe September 11 2010, 07:49:59 UTC

That is a huge compliment, thank you! (For both... damn, I do love me some UST...)

lizbet0 September 19 2010, 04:45:04 UTC

{laughing madly} Oh, this was DELIGHTFUL! I love the banter, Pepper's exasperation, Tony's antics, and Happy's stoic forbearance. The ending is pure gold, though! {still grinning}

May I friend you so I can read more of your work, please? Pretty please?

sarisa_rahe October 7 2010, 19:04:04 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! And poor Happy... yeah. Lol. And please do--I'm sorry it took me so long to reply. RL interfered for a bit, sigh.