Fic: Empty, 1/2 (Tony/Pepper)

[sarisa_rahe]

Title: Empty (Tony/Pepper)
Prompt: Pepperony 200, #104. Empty
Rating: PG-13 (mild sexual content and brief language)
Word Count: 1,696
Summary: Tony’s out of contact somewhere in South America. Pepper’s left behind to panic worry.
Author's Note: Meant to be a drabble but got a bit out of control. Oh, well. :)

Comments

[tonpep1]

Nicely done, I really liked this.

[sarisa_rahe]

Thank you! I was pretty nervous about posting this; there's so much excellent T/P fic out there. I'm playing with the idea of continuing on with this scene...

[tonpep1]

Please continue!

[sarisa_rahe]

Ok :) Will start asap... *scurries off to write more*

[roboticonograph]

Very nice--it's a great scene, and you really have a feel for the characters' voices.

[sarisa_rahe]

Thank you; it means a lot to hear that. I always worry about writing characters with such established voices, and I get nervous... I'm glad you like it!

[sarisa_rahe]

I don't think you need to worry on that score... ;) But I promise there will of course be some angst to balance it out. Can't go without the angst, hehe.

[saichick]

This is really nice. I love the way you did Pepper's internal dialogue, her angst. It's very realistic. Please continue?

[sarisa_rahe]

Will do. I have indeed been convinced. I'm glad you like it; this was sort of an experiment with internal dialogue, for me... I'm not used to writing by myself anymore :) More coming as soon as I get back from the bursar...