Selfish Chapter Six

Apr 07, 2006 21:56

You know the drill...spoilers...Kyouru...Furuba...

I present...( Chapter Six of Selfish )

selfish, furuba fic

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eletriarnation April 8 2006, 20:38:27 UTC
I meant to comment last night, but I didn't get a chance to finish reading it. ^^; I'm sorry our aim convo died... that chocolate and toast sounded good. XD

Favorite line from Tohru: "He confuses me." XD Kyou is good at doing that, ne? That made me laugh. ^_^ Anyway, this was a great chapter, as usual. So much Kyou emoness. *hahaha* You're just trying to rip our hearts out with him, aren't you?--I always find it so sad whenever he starts thinking that he should be hurt and hating himself. *pets Kyou*

Of course, Momiji's entrance was also quite memorable. *pftt* The usagi is such a good source of brain damage for Kyou. LOL. The pace seems a bit slow right now, but I'm guessing it'll pick up, right? ^_^ Thanks for getting this up! You rock. <3

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sari_15 April 9 2006, 02:04:36 UTC
Yeah...sometimes things happen that weren't 'planned'...like a Neko that won't shut his mouth and it gets him kicked in the head...

He wasn't supposed to be a jerk...

Yes, it should 'pick up'...hee hee

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euphoric_fool April 12 2006, 23:18:32 UTC
I apologize for not leaving any feedback earlier. I have been feeling very lethargic these days. Blame it on the weather.

This is wonderful as always and it is nice that to see that you are not rushing things. I like the way you allow the relationship between Kyou and Tohru to slowly develop; it kind of peaks my interest and leaves me curious for the next chapter.

Other than that, you described Kyou's conflicting emotions well, even though that part of his personality bothers me a little (he is too harsh on himself). Hopefully, Tohru shall him to overcome his problems; I hate seeing him in constant agony.

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