Selfish Chapter Five

[sari_15]

Again, the rabid, insane and hungry muse is at it again. Chapter Five is complete! *cries* I think the muse is starting to eat my soul!!!

For all waiting for that LOOOOOOOOONG awaited chapter of Vicissitude...it's coming up next. I won't work on anything else until that is done...that muse can eat that for awhile...

Comments

[eletriarnation]

Hmm... Well this chapter sucked. NOT. *huggles you to the ground* IT WAS GREAT.

(Already expressed to you how wonderful it was, didn't I? AIM is nice for that.)

It felt pretty cool when you made that little incognito mention of Machi. Squealed a little, I gotta say. *lmao* Yuki/Machi, however minimal, is ALWAYS nice. *hahaha*

Other than that, you just better keep up the great job. (I know you can. ^_~) Take care!

[sari_15]

HAHAHHA Glad you caught that. I DO have a little Yuki/Machi muse that has been chewing for awhile. It's for the furuba challege...I've been sitting on it for awhile. It should be cute...you'll adore it XD

[eletriarnation]

Uwaaa! I imagine I WILL adore it, considering good Yuki/Machi is like... non-existent. T_T I can't wait for that! (I know for a fact that Machi-torture is very fluffly achieved through a good round of Yuki's horrible TEASING. *rofl*)

[ionlyeatcandy]

Loving it! I was wondering when Kyo would recognize Tohru...I guess there weren't any...complications...from their little encounter in the first chapter, I suppose this is probably for the best.

Eagerly awaiting more chapters....

[sari_15]

So far...no complications but it's only been a month. :) (I don't think we'll have any lil Kyou's running around soon) LOL but who knows what my muse decides...

[ionlyeatcandy]

only a month...ah see, i though more time had passed for some reason. My reading comprehension skills must be dropping with age...

still good stuff...

[euphoric_fool]

Just letting you know that I am reading this story. And be consoled, it is as wonderful as ever. Hereby, you really managed to capture Kyo's agony and growing fascination for Tohru- this chapter reminded me a bit of Furuba's first chapters. Aside from that, the Momiji mentions (he is my favourite character) were really sweet; it does not surprise me that he has made friends with Tohru again.

In all honesty, I am really obsessed with this chapter and cannot help wondering how it shall continue. Sorry if this "review" borders on incoherency but my mind is already asleep.

Would you mind if I friended you (as you really seem to be a nice person)?

[sari_15]

Yes...I love friends. *will friend back*

It is supposed to be like the beginning of Furuba in a way...since they pretty much have to start over. Glad you enjoy it! Thanks!