Comments | sari_15: Chapter Four of Selfish

sari_15

Chapter Four of Selfish

Mar 12, 2006 01:21

Okay...so this chapter so did not turn out the way I planned...it was not supposed to be a single scene that hit 3,500 words. I like to try to keep my chapters away from the 5,000 word mark. I debated adding the other section, but I had been thinking about scenes that I wanted to add to that too...so I guess Chapter Five will have to do for it. Wow ( Read more... )

selfish, furuba, fic

Comments 5

eletriarnation March 13 2006, 04:33:26 UTC

Yaaay! *claps of happiness* Many thanks to Sarah and her muse. XD This was an awesome chapter, as always. Beautiful Kyouru torture, once again. (I absolutely DIED laughing at them getting stuck in the same room together. Wonderful twist. You rock. *loves you to pieces*)

All IC, all perfect, good dramatic tension... The usual. ^_____^ Keep up the good work.

That cliffy though... 0_0!! I hope your muse will help you write more soon-- I'm becoming slightly dependant on this fic. XD It's reaaaaally good.

(Meaning... WRITE MORE. <333)

sari_15 March 13 2006, 04:48:08 UTC

Hmmm...yeah...the muse is still alive and kicking...

I have 2,700 words of chapter five written already. I just can't stop myself! XD Which isn't a bad thing, but I need to get myself a laptop so I can MOVE from the chair and sit on the floor with the kids or something else. I started on it a little today.

I'm so glad you are enjoying it. I love getting the feedback. I like to hear what people think :)

eletriarnation March 13 2006, 06:50:21 UTC

^_^ Yeah, laptops ARE nice. (I'm kind of sad that my PC blew up, but I still have my laptop... *don't ask... lol*) I can't wait to see how the next chapter will go. Hopefully your children won't miss you much while you write, huh? XD

euphoric_fool March 13 2006, 22:09:40 UTC

I've meant to give you some feedback earlier but RL and studying hindered me from using the computer (much).The fact is that I am still loving your story very much and cannot be grateful enough to you for sharing this. Besides, this chapter helped me to relax yesterday and forget all "pre-examinal" anxieties. Thanks for that.

Otherwise, I really have nothing to say because the chapter is wonderful like always. Just continue writing ^_^.

sari_15 March 13 2006, 23:31:11 UTC

Thanks for taking the time. I do love to hear the feedback that people are reading and enjoying it. Let's me know I am not just randomly sending it into cyberspace XD